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No cheating..spit as soon as you can..but no prewrite bullshit..and no feedin..check in before you spit..or dont check in and just spit..since you're on right now and the last time you battled you key'ed up a verse do it again..so try to spit tonight.. :thumbup: goodluck..
checking in................................................ .
[Kyrogenix talking in his girlish voice:] umm yea...my name used to be Dixie Normous because my dick is enormous!
[T-West:] Yea-right-you-small~penised...internet-living-fuck!-lemme-end-dis-quick
God will punish those who lie since that's a form of sin...
imma help him on his mission and with Kyro...I begin!
Beating down Kyro was my urge, but to kill him is my plan
have him marked for death like he's a sacrifical lamb
Lookin at skill and record...I'm better, our visions don't lie
Nobody watched ya leave the execs...they gave me the other "I"!
KyroGenix sounds like a name dat'd make a teacher flatter'd...
sounds like a scientific term...too bad ya verse dont matter!
Kyro is drawin himself a line...that states that he cant win...
i would call ya stencil...
...but you ain't in the boundaries that I.Q lies in!
Kyro losin pace in this race, the winner always prevails…
He's trying to hammer my verse...but his punches dont nail...
Yea, I'm like Ja...both look like dogs and are always bitchin...
Would say ur shit...
...but since my verse own urs...i'd get charged for litterin!
oh my fuckin god..I posted this shit in elevated frontlines..and you come with that bullshit?:wtf:..okay..
It's funny, your real name's Tristen, but you're going by T West
And to show you my best,I'll stick a bell in your throat...
..just to ring your neck..
You beat me once,and then your ego swole up to heaven
I tried to calm you down,but by the looks of your pics...
..you're already big headed..
Begging to be a lethal lyricist, but Feeble told you to go to hell
You should thank him....
...he saved you from all them LLL's...
I admit..I was pissed, when I got your moms pregnant and shit..
And you were lucky to survive the abortion...
..but now I'm about to finish it..
You might as well stick to the net,you have no chance of gettin signed bro..
And it's sad..T west is living proof...
..that nothing good comes from Toronto..
Im really tryin' not to smack you..cause I was raised not to hit a chick..
But aw shit, with a name like Tristen..
..You make it hard to resist...
To see a wack rapper kids, turn to West for a perfect example..
And all bets down, you can bet your life on this battle..
...but it's not worth the gamble..
uppin
Kryogeneix-good personals awsome... came hard wit them
your punches were better and u had good flow/structure,
metas good... multis didnt see none...
T-West-Also no multis... i wusn't feeling your punches,
for elevated this was a weak verse,,, u shouldn't be expectiong,
easy wins in an elevated battle... come hard in elevated battles,
you didnt really have no personals in the verse really only had...
in the intro... it flowed n had good structure that's about it...
My V/Kryogenix... hit up my topical with rule in elevated
umm..some poll votes would surely be appreciated..uh huh..they sure would..so vote...!!!!
uppin for sum votes...............................
ummm..any votes?....
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uppin this shit for my crew fam...peace...
also..in my opinion..I think Kryo got this shit..he had a punch in every single bar...T WEST cam weak to be in elite..
uppin for voters who can poll
T West - nicest drop iv seen from u yet.. impressive.. very consistant.. used the personals to full advantage.. non-stop punches an a flow that altho wasnt amazin it still did the job an didnt fall off.. didnt like ya opener.. but the closer was witty.. nice metas thruout.. minimal played lines too.. props..
Kry - not ya best by a long shot.. opened weak.. an up until half way thru ya verse u stayed that way.. alot of played concepts an stretched lines made the punches lack any force.. u picked it up half way thru an ended wiv some dope lines.. if ud keyed like that fa the whole verse u woulda taken this.. but cos of the bad start an inconsistancy i felt u let yaself down..
VoTe = T-West
For a consistantly harder-hittin personal verse..
Could u drop a vote on this plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114168
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upin for more votes
T West=nice, could have been better i guess
Kyro=good come back, nice
my vote=T West
..bullshit ass vote..and T West..hw many times are you gonna get a mod to edit your verse?..first you asked Feeble Minded to edit..now you asking Token?...wtf?..you adding shit or what?...Quote:
Originally Posted by illtalic
uppin for some real damn votes..