"Who's Next"... Drop Links

this some raw shit man.. def. my best.. drop ur links too..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/ve...tionsmusic.htm

i like the beat..its mad familiar though..like that jada and sparxx track..lyrics and expression are aiight..could be tighter..i'm sure you'll elevate on this..all in all..its a pretty nice verse for a short track..maybe you'll add to it in the future..if so..i'd like to hear it when its finished..till then..keep workin..

pZ..

thnx.. n this is hte "Ja Rule-Clap Back" instrumentals..

up.

not bad, delivery is good...flow is on point...im not really feelin the quality of vocals but other than that, good job...keep it up


return the favor:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30#post1171030

thnx.. n i'll peep that latedr..

iont really like the beat, but thats irrelavant, cuz you're riddin it nicely....

skipped off the beat towards the end...

your expression and feelin is really nice, i wish i could master that.....

not bad at all, just keep workin, you got a good voice and all, elevate on the lyrics a lil and study the beat some to stay on it and you'll def be ill


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113082 <~my thread...

thnx n i'll peep the links in a minute..

FUCKIN DOPE men..................I have the beat and you used it so well, your lyrics are good men.....some of your rimes just got me standing up men=fuckin dope.........
Your flow is really fit for the beat but the only thing nixt time put the beat less loud so we can hear you lines more clearly

PIC
Peace

quality is good
flow is shaky a bit
lyrics are decent
not bad at all man

keep it up

thnx jon raw n PIC...