ILLunatic v.s wordplay

i'm bored off my ass
and this kid replied to my call out...
So... he's gettin what he wants.....

10 lines
you spit first
no feeding
no biteing
no recycling
no crew votes
no hate votes
no d/r votes

ha ^^^^^^^^^^^checkin in

you got the type of rhymes..I don't want to read or hear/
in fact...instead of postin' back.... picture me with covered ears/
actin' all cocky, line no one will vote for mine/
can't you even see...that is was 2:42 when you died?/
after I type this verse...I'm gonna freepost/
get disqualified....and still end up snatchin, all your votes/
your a softy...watch you get pulled like taffy/
if you need me to spit newbie-like..all you gotta do is ask me/
crush me? your the one gettin' smashed -g-/
if rhymes were wieght....you would float like anti-gravity/


there ya go......

This kids styles disfigured, i figured he was a wack newbie
He's like the Detroit Lions team, completely weak truley
Takin this battle easily, no problems i got it under control
Dude better dig a hole.......
.....like saddam hussein, in order not to get eatin whole
Its a simple defeat, no need to try against this wannabe
He was wantin me...........
.................his homosexual tendencies was hoppin see
His status is invisible, thankfully he doesn't seem to appear
Oh look he's queer......
.....His location says "above xceltiz's grave", prolly in tears
Time to finish him, as i deminish him, he pleads in fear
The end is near, time for this kid to get d/r's straight up the rear

...........BLAH...........
....Uppin for votes....
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haha^^^^^^^^^nice

ayite...uppin' for votes ya'll

an average battle but i fink dat illunatic gets it because his had a better flow and he had some punches, but they were rather weak.
both of you need to get evaluating but keep it up

vote illunatic

^LMFAO..
You actually think i was tryin
Its almost 7:00 Am.............
I'm to damn tired................

we both typed quickly, this shit aint even serious ..shit...anyways..still uppin

ite not a good battle but like you say,
who the fuck can write hard at 7...................lmfa.....
neway ive seen much better from ill.....but he did,
what he had to do here.............both came quite played,
actually but ill takes punches alot harder.....
word you had punches just your wording was of so it really affected flow,
also ill takes structure and wordplay was nice here by ill,
nice phraseing etc..............personals goes to ill also,
even tho newbe shit is played he pulled it of....
not the best of battles but vote-ill...........


plz hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112131 thx...........pz

Yea.. i'm bout to go to bed
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I'm out tho.. peace

you got the type of rhymes..I don't want to read or hear/
in fact...instead of postin' back.... picture me with covered ears/
nah...covered ears?...this is text :(
actin' all cocky, line no one will vote for mine/
can't you even see...that is was 2:42 when you died?/
I didnt get it...pm me an explination if you think this line will cost you
after I type this verse...I'm gonna freepost/
get disqualified....and still end up snatchin, all your votes/
this one was cool
your a softy...watch you get pulled like taffy/
if you need me to spit newbie-like..all you gotta do is ask me/
nope
crush me? your the one gettin' smashed -g-/
if rhymes were wieght....you would float like anti-gravity/
eeeh, i guess ok

This kids styles disfigured, i figured he was a wack newbie
He's like the Detroit Lions team, completely weak truley
blah
Takin this battle easily, no problems i got it under control
Dude better dig a hole.......
.....like saddam hussein, in order not to get eatin whole
nah
Its a simple defeat, no need to try against this wannabe
He was wantin me...........
.................his homosexual tendencies was hoppin see
not a punch
His status is invisible, thankfully he doesn't seem to appear
Oh look he's queer......
.....His location says "above xceltiz's grave", prolly in tears
lol, nice
Time to finish him, as i deminish him, he pleads in fear
The end is near, time for this kid to get d/r's straight up the rear
Nope....wouldnt dick rider be on his dick?...

I think ill had the best line. I just wasnt feeling much of the rest cause he came with a couple weak punches and some lines didnt have punches. I know he can come nice but it just wasnt there in thid verse. Wordplay didnt have any lines as good as ills one line. i wasn't feeling much of that verse either. This is a hard vote, but i gotta go with ill for at least making me smurk.

Vote: Ill

Please return the favor...I really need votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=111341&page=1

think both could have come alot harder with the punches... and with less played lines.... but Ill ive seen you do much better battles, but looking at the opponent's verse, id wasnt really needed to pull it all out.... you still take this, you came with more creativity and harder punching with a better feel to your verse,,, less noob'ish...... so you get the vote..... your opening was stronger aswell as the closer, thought it could have been worded better.... all in all vote=Ill

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......UPPIN.........

well kinda close... Ill had a few punches
so did wordplay but here ya go....

Ill-you take punches cauz yours just came
a little harder, Im gonna also give you multis...
you had afew here and there... personals I
didnt really see anything worth giving this
to either of you so Nobody gets that
category... well you got wordplay tho
since yours wus well... worded better

wordplay-your taking flow/structure for
the soel purpose that you had a better
flow/structure... but that wont win you a battle
both verses were weak... I know you both can
do better than that...

My VOte-Ill...return the favour wit honest votes on my battle in sig(assassin) and this one
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110949
_-SyaNidal-_...OUT

^Didn't poll vote but .. eh..
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UPPIN............................