10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
good luck
peace
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10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
good luck
peace
aight look
My rhymes get you shunned from forum like you got lepracy
your can't elevate against me in a battle, you just stand next to me
Cause my techniques a rush just like adrenaline, flowing threw menolin
I'll draw my blood from your veins and then re-inject it again
Whatever rhymes you have i don't care, cause beatins you's a must
Just like sex you last ten seconds on this mic and then you bust
If you winn then its luck , cause in this game your just a rookie
this kid is still a virgin , i thought he did it all for the nookie?
Go ahead and test your skills spit one rhyme or spit two
Who even needs a voter, we both know undoubtibly i'm better then you
im like verbal steel, the way im coming this hard,
you shit is weak, more suited for greeting cards,
another newb to RB, i should stay away shits spreading,
like your punches, you'll be a misses at ur wedding,
i was bored, so i decided to waste my time with this cat,
im serving this cat, like he's dinner on a place mat*
the prodgical child is here, thinks he jesus or something,
he couldn't reach my level, if he spat his lyrics whilst jumping,
your name give me punches equivelnt to a building frame,
i give other rappers new personals....
so i archiatected the complex world of personals an pain,
*place mat, is what we serve food on, in the U.K, i dunno if y'all call it same in the U.S
an the last bar,
your name give me punches equivelnt to a building frame,
i give other rappers new personals....
..................so i archiatected the complex world of pain,
nice battle.... this rookie was actually decent................CP kept a solid flow an had decent puncehs, but i think his punches didn't really hit tehy weren't directed an wordplay was weak....... menolin came with grat play on words an hit wiht consistent punches......... solid verse..
vote menolin...
im like verbal steel, the way im coming this hard,
you shit is weak, more suited for greeting cards,
best line....^
My rhymes get you shunned from forum like you got lepracy
your can't elevate against me in a battle, you just stand next to me
^alright Ok met4 here with a lil punchy...
Cause my techniques a rush just like adrenaline, flowing threw menolin
I'll draw my blood from your veins and then re-inject it again
a good meta4.....intrestin wordplay
Whatever rhymes you have i don't care, cause beatins you's a must
Just like sex you last ten seconds on this mic and then you bust
^bustin on a mic is a compliment.......alright
If you winn then its luck , cause in this game your just a rookie
this kid is still a virgin , i thought he did it all for the nookie?
^worst line ever.....u lost respect....
Go ahead and test your skills spit one rhyme or spit two
Who even needs a voter, we both know undoubtibly i'm better then you
^okey dokey....thats a weak closer..but..meh..we'll see
im like verbal steel, the way im coming this hard,
you shit is weak, more suited for greeting cards,
^good punch and good meta4 in one line....uh oh...
another newb to RB, i should stay away shits spreading,
like your punches, you'll be a misses at ur wedding,
^good punch and an OK meta4.......ehhe
i was bored, so i decided to waste my time with this cat,
im serving this cat, like he's dinner on a place mat*
^this is weak.....
the prodgical child is here, thinks he jesus or something,
he couldn't reach my level, if he spat his lyrics whilst jumping,
^lol alright....this is an ok punch
your name give me punches equivelnt to a building frame,
i give other rappers new personals....
so i archiatected the complex world of personals an pain,
^good closer.....
menolin takes it sorry dog good batlle.......LOL we call em placemats too LOL like its a different planet or something..... =)
check it..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111150
I expected this to be a very one-sided battle,
But ChildProdigy kind of surprised me & dropped ok..
..Nice for front lines..some good lines..potential.
Both sides had structure & flow..
Though ChildProdigy's was a little off at times, nothin major.
But in a battle punches are most important..
& although ChildProdigy had some ok lines & some attempts at punches..
Menolin had better ones.. some funny & hard hitting lines.
Overall pretty even, nothing great by both..
But i guess Menolin edged this with mostly experience..
But good job ChildProdigy ..keep elevating.
Menolin
My rhymes get you shunned from forum like you got lepracy
your can't elevate against me in a battle, you just stand next to me
decent opener....okay punch
Cause my techniques a rush just like adrenaline, flowing threw menolin
I'll draw my blood from your veins and then re-inject it again
first line good...second okay, flow was a little off
Whatever rhymes you have i don't care, cause beatins you's a must
Just like sex you last ten seconds on this mic and then you bust
not bad, kinda played but decent wording
If you winn then its luck , cause in this game your just a rookie
this kid is still a virgin , i thought he did it all for the nookie?
nope...not feelin this.....
Go ahead and test your skills spit one rhyme or spit two
Who even needs a voter, we both know undoubtibly i'm better then you
weak closer...............
im like verbal steel, the way im coming this hard,
you shit is weak, more suited for greeting cards,
2nd line was good.
another newb to RB, i should stay away shits spreading,
like your punches, you'll be a misses at ur wedding,
this was not bad....could've been worded differently though
i was bored, so i decided to waste my time with this cat,
im serving this cat, like he's dinner on a place mat*
punch was decent, flow was off a little bit....
the prodgical child is here, thinks he jesus or something,
he couldn't reach my level, if he spat his lyrics whilst jumping,
better......
your name give me punches equivelnt to a building frame,
i give other rappers new personals....
so i archiatected the complex world of personals an pain,
good closer........
overall both verses were decent but Menolin had more creative punches, they weren't as played out...decent drops by both though, a little weak with the personals but good battle nonetheless...
uppin
second time uppin
Menolin won this won cause of the extent of his personals. Both flows were a little off at times. Cp could use some help with his vocab and his punches need to hit alot harder, but not bad for a new cat. Menolin your punches weren't too consistent but they hit at times with more force than any from cp.Good battle over all but Cp had lack of fire so my vote goes to Menolin
VOTE_MENOLIN
Open battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111055