KiLlEr EmCeE vs. U R Hear

ite rulez:
no crew.....hate.....or d/r
um....
max n min. 10 linez.....
blind spit afta both chek in
due 20 minutez afta both chek in.....
lez do dis...... :thumbup:

dis iz mah chekkkkkkkkk innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.........

im here

ill start by injectin pain into ya midsection
and get to stretchin ya torso longer than rookie bars and your check in
With a hip throw, ill hit ya wit quick blows
Im like Moses partin the sea the way I rip flows
this bitch knows.. whos iller your hardly a killer
From my parent's room? even they would clown you, like Ben Stiller
your goal is to spit a filler, with no power to harness
You wish you could recycle lines, but your rhymes are all garbage
you get neglected, throwin up more signs than a deaf crip
and ill snatch ya necklace so fast itll leave ya neck less

if you dont get it.. dont vote

ite chek chek...

Dis kid banged into a parked car n' claimed a "hit n' run"
For every weak punch u throw...i throw a harder..for each one
But i wuldnt have 2 throw any...cuz u got none
so keep on da look out 4 mah punches...stay shun
"say it dun spray it"..cus ya mouth iz doin all da "spitting"
u swing like a "high blind man"..ya punches aint hittin
like a hacker i go into ur system ..n delete ur cookiez...
but dis kid only has one item- yall look at dese rookiez!
But afta im through wit u...ya cookiez will be "clear"
I have now oficially erased the memory of "U R Hear"

upppinnnn

... ok sure.. up for votes

excellent flow on the both of you. UR HEAR hit us up with consistent word play
...and get to stretchin ya torso longer than rookie bars and your check in...You wish you could recycle lines, but your rhymes are all garbage.....
very nice.
I like the speed of it. It seems like it might have a certain west coast like quickness to it. The flow was nice.
Killer emcee got the luxury second, but was unable to make a solid attack. Which is not to say it wasn't a nice verse. It just shows a noticeable room for improvement. But hey it's twenty minutes so. He had a nice opener that was ready to keep our attention. And the rest of the verse did, but it didn't have that effectiveness to it enough to wow me. So i give this one to U R Hear. Great efforts on both people though.



please vote on this battle

Maku JaiiLiin the Ominous vs. Chugs4life

^^ite ite.....n U R hear....not 2 vote sway...but may i ask how u did dat in only 11 minutez...????.....uppinnnn
(2)

Good battle..........nice closer on hears part.....okay closer fo killer......killers verses were much better in structure and i felt that u r hear's were strechted out a lil especially in the second line,good overall battle punches were mostly on hears side,also multis,but killer gets mah vote in everything else especially structure..
good battle...no hate..
vote=killer for having better structure
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109267

u r here - ok structure.......flow is pretty good.........vocab is pretty good........some of the multis were tight.......i was feelin most of ya punches..........no personals......

killer emcee - pretty good structure........flow is ok........vocab is good at parts..........multis were nice...........some of ya punches connected.........ok personal......

conclusion - this was a close battle but ima say killer emcee takes this wit punches and personals

VOTE - KILLER EMCEE

yo since i took the time to leave my opinion id appreciate if u two did the same

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110019

thanx.........

Hear

ill start by injectin pain into ya midsection
and get to stretchin ya torso longer than rookie bars and your check in
decent personal, even though ya line ^^ was really stretched
With a hip throw, ill hit ya wit quick blows
Im like Moses partin the sea the way I rip flows
not a bad punch.. average FL
this bitch knows.. whos iller your hardly a killer
From my parent's room? even they would clown you, like Ben Stiller
blah.. played...
your goal is to spit a filler, with no power to harness
You wish you could recycle lines, but your rhymes are all garbage
creative
you get neglected, throwin up more signs than a deaf crip
and ill snatch ya necklace so fast itll leave ya neck less
you said neck less twice, not feelin it


Kill

Dis kid banged into a parked car n' claimed a "hit n' run"
For every weak punch u throw...i throw a harder..for each one
coulda re-wored this and made it much better
But i wuldnt have 2 throw any...cuz u got none
so keep on da look out 4 mah punches...stay shun
what... wack
"say it dun spray it"..cus ya mouth iz doin all da "spitting"
u swing like a "high blind man"..ya punches aint hittin
decent punch.. not bad
like a hacker i go into ur system ..n delete ur cookiez...
but dis kid only has one item- yall look at dese rookiez!
not really direct and hard hitting
But afta im through wit u...ya cookiez will be "clear"
I have now oficially erased the memory of "U R Hear"
ok closing


Overall - Here took this, his punches were harder and more complex.

ite ite 2-2......uppin...........(3).....yo hear....u mite wanna up dis 2 u noe//////

this is some funny shit, nice dickrides from the 2 idiots that voted for Killer.. and good votes for the 2 that arent on his dick.. Maku ill be sure to hit up your battle

by the way for celestial and everyone else who doesnt understand.. i stretched the second line on purpose.. and maybe im just stupid, but Ive never seen someone use a meet the parents line referring to his Location before..

^ every vote against he calls it a dick-ride... moron... heres my breakdown:

punches - killer: connected with a few more than hear...

multis - hear: killer had none that i saw...

opener / closer - killer: if u would of re-worded ur opener it would of been better...

structure - killer: read it easier

flow - hear: easier to go with

nice job both... posting random, be happy...

vote - killer