D.liver.E vs YO YO YO

ok, u spit first, I'll drop short after...
10 linez min
no crew votez
no hate votez
blablabla
I won't feed off ya verse
Good luck
pz.

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yeah go and drop ya verse........................ good luck

Okay HO-mie..... time for u to take a hike,go round the corner and suck pipes, im a trademark like nike
battling me? Im way better....u in the wrong division,...ill kill u without doing anything like a abortion
I come at the top like a new hit, admit it?....Flush u like shit...always reaching a womens clit
Im bout to finish dis PARAPPA THE RAPPA....she doesnt fit ere .... like a skinny women in a sumo thong
put her out wid a bedtime song......ring her bell ....ding dong...... whoop ass all along... kill this wannabe queen kong
trying to c me daredevil?..... Cant c me im invinceable..... turning your lights out like another blackout
Blow and burn twice to dis deadly device and walk away free like a bailout
Ill grate u like cheese, beat u wid ease.... too hot for u like chillis.....leave u stuck like santa in chimneys
Leave her depressed.... thinkin wot to write? which will impress..leave her eyes going crosseyed...aint going to beat me the moon aint blue
This chick aint allowed on dis site...too young for all the bite.....go off baby gal... wot do u want me to do nxt......... spank u or breastfeed u?

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aight
who the fuck I gotta battle now... Some bitch named "yo yo yo"
I'll make 'em laugh at u, like santa's shoutin' out they "ho ho ho's"/
santa ? Yeah probably cuz itz freezin' *outsiiiiiide*
but I still burn mc's, spit some flamez on a *miiiiic*/
I eat mc's like dinnah... but I'm not gainin' weight
I'mma leave u lost so u can feel ok to be misplaced/
abasement is what ya facin' while I face some ovations
they all "STAND UP" as I expose my domination/
*yo yo yo*... a 'hattrick' in usin' rapz most ordinary word
*no no no*... u aint hot at all but u still got burned/
fuck that, a lesson was learned... call me ya teacher
It only took like 5% of my brain to really beat ya/
50% is sleepin' 24 hours a day, they don't show no life
the other 45, dunnow, lost em late last night.../

here's some advice, try and work on your flow cuz it fuckz up everything... by the way I'm a guy, I just like that avatar, she's fucking hot :hump:

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aight, i can't vote yet but some good stuff here. i would say the vote would go to d.liver.e.... nice structure, good punches.
Yo Yo Yo - ur structure was horrible, you need to clean it up and ur shit didn't really make much sense so nice battle and i would put my vote on d.liver.e. Peace Out x

iight... im not even gon break the verses down cuz Y.Y.Y's would be impossible

Yo - work on ya struct and rhyme scheme, i suggest you visit Wackness Emergancy Center and get some tips. your punches were alright but flow and struct was horrible.

D - ya struct was alright, you dont need the """ around the words and // after ya lines. you had some ok punches and they took this battle

my vote - D

Punches - I believed that D.liver.E had the better punches because he used more personals.. The punches were still kinda weak, but were good enough to seal the victory.

Wordplay -D.liver.E dominated the wordplay. The other guy didnt really Use much wordplay

Flow - TIE ... Both flows seemed to be horrible. I couldnt really see the flow...

Vocab - Tie.. The vocab was very limited in this battle. I didnt see much creative vocab used.

I vote D.liver.E because he had more direct punches that hit harder.


Please drop votes here...
Battle Verses Quelude
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584

Battle Verses Killa Kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109803

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Yo Yo Yo you need a lot of work, structure, rhyming, punches wordplay basically everything. D.liver.E Your verse was ok, some punches that actually hit, and you structure was better, basically everything from you was better, and thats why you beat Yo Yo Yo.

Yo Yo Yo you need the wackness emergency centre bud.

Vote - D.liver.E

Yo Yo Yo.. sort the structure out.. the rhyming words got lost as I was getting further through the whole verse.. You had some good ideas, but executed them poorly.. look for words that fit in well to help the flow..
Punches were okay.. but overall the structure did your verse bad damage..
D.liver.E - structure was alot better.. some creative punches used..
Lacked in some places but seemed to be a better verse overall..

Vote - D.liver.E

Return the favour.. I need just one more vote - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110472

uppin................................ need one more vote....

Where to start. Yoyoyo yo need ta fix ya structure, and people like it if ya lines rhymes. You need to actually diss your oppenent, not jus say how good you are. Theres a self-glorification cypher for that. You didn't throw any real good punches, and came with the played as hell sex shit...and no other real punches or personals in ya verse

DLE...you had a lot of filler in ya verse. Some actual puncjes tho...while they weren't great..still got you the V casue yoyoyo didn'y throw any really. The nonono and hohoho is played,. The last couple lines I liked, but they werem't really punches or nuthin. So you win with ya couple good punches.

I know yall can't vote yet, but drop an opinion here. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110722