10 lines
Spit your dopeness first
No hate/crew/the normal stuff
G'luck
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10 lines
Spit your dopeness first
No hate/crew/the normal stuff
G'luck
check. go fo it dawg...................................
chekin in so 25 minutes each if that s kool ill drop now ......................
ya gone you kid, you v been lost fo dayz, i ll eat you up like i do my lays
your lifes become a failure,yo rhyme sounds like,"stolen from a mind maze"
think i d pull a no show,ya realy aint scary, now yo mom thats a diffrent story
that gurl makes me worry,still callin her momy?now she french o' just dat hairy
i got 10 lines to kill you, the thing is that by three you ll be picking up a tissue
thats nuthing by 8 you ll be layin on tha floor with your face red, black n blue
Il start and end this round beleive it,think your rap will flow,ya sinkin in da sewer
you gotta sloppy drop,cant hack it ,i no for a fact my mute bro would rap better
if your still readin your probly confused, i Just witness a no show, am i tha new news
your still breathin congrats, now go drop yo pen and go change fo spontaneus blues
alright man i had to hurry some lines in there i dint get every thing i wanted in there oh well
All about your Dr. Mario Avy
You spit bones cause your fat ass inhaled the turkey
Your simple minded so ill dumb it down for ya...merky merky
When i put the L to this kid i'll be splittin his lines like chainsaws...
Gots his nintendo controller hooked up.. franticaly mashin pause...
I was gonna rip this kid in half like a peice of red meat
But his super mario avy kept fuckin up the beat...(tappin its foot)
Good you got the doctor here to treat you after the fight..
Tryed 2 save the princess she gave you an impossible mission.....a mic
This battles over level complete, You need a bonus life
Lemme switch to duck hunt so I can shoot you up right
LMAO this should be an avy battle!
haha kool that was funny man i liked your verse all about DR, lol
good battle man now lets jsut get some votes
uppin this shit. Remeber to leave a link..........
Come on, votes please, uppin #2. Leave a link and we'll hit it up
bonespitter, some things i liked, some things i didn't.. thought it was a little plain and could use more wordplay and creativity. harder punches too. not understandable if u had to hurry. lyric.. alot of it I liked, hit him hard with his dr.mario.. could've expanded into some others things as well. but over creative, nice verse, better punches. u got this in my mind.
vote-lyric
Hit my battle up please, and return the favor. slept on real bad.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&page=1&pp=15
bonespitter, aight verse, you needed harder
punches, im not sure if i even saw one in there,
your strusture wasnt all that good either, your
flow was aight, but i couldnt really catch da rhythm.
lyric, your verse was nice, some decent punches,
you needed a couple more though, but its all good,
i was feelin your flow it was nice, structure was aight,
but not to good, and that duck hunt line was dope dawg.
my vote: lyric
return da favor and hit up any of my battles, thanks.
bonespitter, aight verse, you needed harder
punches, im not sure if i even saw one in there,
your strusture wasnt all that good either, your
flow was aight, but i couldnt really catch da rhythm.
lyric, your verse was nice, some decent punches,
you needed a couple more though, but its all good,
i was feelin your flow it was nice, structure was aight,
but not to good, and that duck hunt line was dope dawg.
my vote: lyric
Bone- I dont think your shit flowed too good at all. You had some attempts at punches but the flow just fucked it up. You also came weak with your punch attempts. Be more creative an work on your flow a little.
Lyric- Your verse was pretty nice. The whole thing was a personal, which made it even better. Very creative. Some very funny shit, i enjoyed readin it.
OVERALL- Lyric for creativity, flow an all that good shit
Good battle an keep elevating guys
ok The last two post are fuckin identical but.
Bone ya verse was decent. If ya gonna rush it dog at least put some better punches in there. The structure your usin is alright but don't run on ya shit. Your verse about ya lines could have been better if you chnged the punch at eh end wit the red black and blue thing.
Now lyric. Ya killed his avy and his name. you had some pretty good punches and ya format was alright too. Ya lines were good cause you had pretty good personals in there also Bonespitter lacked in that department. Don't keep it so simple and you would've had this one easy.
VOTE_LYRIC
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