Doper Than Thou. .

This Is My Verse For A Collab With Kredit. . For My CD {mE = everyMCsquared}. . Waitin For His Verse, Figured I'd Go Head N Post Mine Cause I'm Bored N Want Some Opinions. .

We're The Epitomy Of Every Letter, Enemies Only See Us Gettin Better
Detinate. . . Officiate. . . Punctuate. . . Elevate. . .
To The Top With Images And Penmenship That Changes Raps Landscape
We Never Had To Claim To Be Dope, It Came With The Territory
Now Our Names Before Bodies Have Reached Purgatory, The Glory
We Don't Even Have To Celebrate A Merking, Cause It's Natural
For Us To Reign Supreme, Raise N Get Paid, Controllin' N Holdin The Capital
Now The Only Beef We Talk About, Is When We Makin A Sandwich
We Paint Pictures With Words, But Our Tongues Have Yet To Hit A Canvas
Ambulances Filled With People Who Jumped At The Cirumstances
And Were Left With Third Degree Burns From Our Lines, Never A Chance N
The Glances N Glares Can Be Compared To When The King Made The March
Cause They Never Seen Two Men So Amazing At One Type Of Art
We're Set Apart From The Rest, Forced To Look Down To The Ground
Scenary Similar The Mountains, We'd Say A Few Words Now. .
. . . .But From Our Height. . . . . We'd Be Talking To Loud. .
We Can't Help If Most, If Not All, Are Submerged Up Under Us
Lines To Body Structure, We Can Be Doctors N Perform Tummy Tucks
Ya'll Cats Is Phat ? Well The Heaps Of MC's On Our Plates. . Shit
We're Overweight N Force Even A Great Mind To Go Back To The Basics
Doper Than Thou, Serious Sinister Shocks Of Superiority
We're So Hated N Debated That Authority Bands Together Like Sororities
To Try N Halt The Madness, Guys, You're Just Wasting Time On Clocks
Cause You Come At Us With Shit On Ya Hip N Hop To Try N Stop . . .
. . Us. . . But Trust. . You Can Never Take Kredit N Form From Hip Hop
N If You Focus On One Drop. . I'm Building A House With My Lines. .
. . So Go On Ahead N Ignore Me. .
Cause After I Spit A Trilogy. . . I'm Throwing All Rappers From The 3rd Story
And You Know, They Said I Wasn't Dope. .
They Were Just Being Hypothetical With Their Hypothesis
Cause After One Audio Experiment, I Climbed Atop The Pedastal. . .
And Became The Independent Variable Who Changes Rap While Droppin This


Structure May Seem Fucked A Bit. . But With The Periods. . I Have Shit Spaced So It Flows. . Pz.

Dope piece, I seriously felt this. Your multis were nice, and it took me two times too read, but I found the flow. Some really decent punches and wordplay in here.
You have a great vocabulary as well. Cant really think of nething you can improve on, I mean I woulda said structure, but you cleared thyat up ahead of time. So decent drop, keep at it.
Pz.

..Dope..^ like he said..great multis..and many quoteables..it had numerous numbers of decent punches..let me know when the second verse is up..or when the audio is up..

2nd Verse Will Be Kredit's. . Audio Will Take Some Time. . For People That Reply After This. . Maybe Quote Some Lines That Stood Out To You ? Appreciate It, I'm Deserving Of A Breakdown And/Or Long Reply. . Pen, Get At Me For A Collab, Serious . . Pz.

thats some quality material, felt it from deep. id love to acctually hear it.

hmmm
I couldn't find a flow to this, but I'm sure it's written to the beat you're recording, so thats cool. I liked that you worked in more multies than usual, but theres always room for more.

I'm not even gonna get into the content cause it was quotable as fuck.
This seemed like a very commercial rhyme. I prefer topical pieces, but hey, to each his own =)

Dope piece here, Good Multis i want to hear the Audio. I rate this a 9/10
peace.

Thanks For The Feedback So Far. . Let's Get Some More REplies. . A Breakdown. . SOmething New For Me. . Pz.

I Was Feelin This Hot Shit Fam Keep Spittin....................

Damn. . These Replies Were Decent. . Let's Get Some More. . This Is One Of My Best To Date. . Pz.

Yopucame Raw And Hungry Nuff Said Thats Was All You Needed.