M_Chex vs. Da Saviour

Checkin In.

checkinnnnnn
you spit first, up to 20 minutes? confirm again, man

Da Saviour, nuttin but a faggot dick in the butt taker.
Myself, I'm a pimp, like Bond from Moonraker.
I might just take ya bitch or ya jewels.
Before you know it you'll be face down leakin, drownin in pools.
Of red, no bitch, I never fled.
I Stood tall even when the paramedics came.
To clean your brain matter off the walls

You need to spit 10 lines, read rules. You're DQ'd.

hummm?? thats all??
nyway, im gonna spit ok?
good luck

boy, you must be kiddin with a drop like this,
is your mama asking for a good night`s kiss?
you think you`re a big good gangsta,mmm, m_chex
but we all know you are the only pimp having no sex
just try shooting me, and you´ll see what a good reply should look like,
3 holes are more than times you tryed to grab a mic
you should hide your ass if you want to see more winters,
appear and ill crush your bones into lil splinters
you try the best it was supposed to a shitie newby,
next time remember you need to battle somebody who aint high!

damn.. anyway this is it, we need some votes in here!
uppin and looking for voters please

Yo, alright.. both your endings weren't very good so they kinda cancel each other out. Flow I liked on both, structure ok, chex u shoulda expanded some and used up more lines to throw more punches at him. he beat u in overall punches and hit you harder. creativity was kinda there on both. wordplay ehh... but DaSav got this one.

vote- Dasaviour

M_Chex do u see the battle I set up with u and me?? I PM'ed you but no response. I haven't gotten a chance to write my verse up yte, but its due by 10. Let me know if u know about it.
HIT my battle up with FairInHeight! Return Favor.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108266

uppin this shitt.....
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chex- what you had wasnt too bad for rhymes and flow, but the personals and pucnhes lacked alright wordplay

savior had pretty good flow too, good rhymes, more for personals, alright punches, and ok wordplay,

pretty close battle, but i think savior got the win on this one.

come on, looking for votes today....