Kwizikal v Lyrical Sniper

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This is my checkin.........

Aiiight...Straight merkin this Sheep Humpin Welsh fool......


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This guy Lyrical wanna get Physical...Then I'm bound 2 bring the "pain"
Guy must be insane to wanna conduct in wargamez..He's 2 tame
Why Sniper wanna test?...This guy weak without knowledge Blud
Suburbanite Sheep Shagger...This guy anything But From the hood
Leave ya like ya sig...With violence even Saddam Hussein wudn't condone
All remains is skull N Crossbones...And it's time this site was truely shown
That Kwizikal is the Future...Lyric Snipe ain't who he's depictin to be...
...Cos I'm strong N he's weak like a white collar worker with H.I.V...
..."Pain Don't Come at a price"...But you'll Probably lose your life, Boy...
...Must be a fool...Claimin U from a football Hooligan crew..that U ain't joined
Thought he'd battle this Brand Newb...Thinkin New Boy wud be weak..
Your Land's full of Countryside,Hills N sheep...How the fuck can u be Street?...
So,INclusion...The Snipers Dead...Been Killed at his own wargames....
He been shot down N burnt up more than Iraqi Warplanes....


An insight to the sheep shagger lines - Old tales of werlsh boys "rammin" (get it) sheep
Oh, n the football hooligan line...Went on his profile n checked his site n it's some homo football syndicate

Sinister textual combustions, leading to molecular ruptures
My flows are heavy-weight.. crushing Kwizikal's skeletal structure

A pharaoh in my past life known as the Gore King
Dropping intoxicated corrupted scriptures, with a hardcore sting

Suicidal bomb attacks with masks on like it's an Arabian law
Leave you praying to Jehovah equipped with a titanium jaw

My iron words are noxious.. on a collision with your skull, leavin ya unconscious
I surrender to my pestilent ways, rip ya eyes out your head just so you can watch this

I spit verses from my holy book to leave this demon exiled
And bust slugs until he has more bugs in him than a broken text file

First let me state it.. Relly gets eliminated.. your fates been slated
Tombstone dated.. welcome to your funeral.. I’m glad you made it

Grab a floppy and save it.. my tongue lashings sting like a slave whip
So arch your back when I deliver on line with your spine that makes your neck split

I'll stuff your stomach with the innards of a cow’s rectum cuz you’re full of bullshit
Only way to improve your status is to tongue kiss the full clip

I’m in top condition.. and Kwizikal ... well, he's barely grazing the ledge
I'm constantly blazing heads.. heard you packed razors only to shave your legs

so with out further a do this is for the wanna battle masses
with a flow so hot it'll stem up, your steam free glasses

and ashes is what ill turn you into
and the only way you'll ever be as hot as me, IS IF I SPIT FOR YOU!!

UNLESS YOU UNDERSTAND THE WORDPLAY, PLEASE DONT VOTE!!

lyrical sniper takes this one. better structure and punches. need to work on the metas both of you. and kwizikal try to not stretch your lines.

I’m in top condition.. and Kwizikal ... well, he's barely grazing the ledge
I'm constantly blazing heads.. heard you packed razors only to shave your legs
- best line

vote: Lyrical

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106989

hit that up asap___

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....Don't agree....My punches were all personal...whereas he's could be aimed at Elton John...they not personal

^ Stop Complaining You Lil Bitch, 1-0 Uppin.....................

Tight battle...

Kwizikal.. structure was okay, tho messed up at times.. could'a been worded better in places..
Some tight punches, good personal references..
Opener and closer were pretty weak, but the rest of the verse held out well..
Sniper.. again structure was off in places.. don't put gaps in the verse..
Not much in the way of personals, but some tight punches.. slugs/bugs text files etc..
Some nice wordplay throughout..
Vocab was tight also..
Basically its a close battle.. but the fact that Lyrical's verse was longer overall.. added more impact..
It was pretty consistant, as was Kwizikals.. but the extra few bars took it really..
If this was even length verses it mighta been different, but for a few stand out bars..

Vote - Lyrical Sniper

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108818

2-0 uppin for your votes..........................

Opener - Lyrical
Vocab - Lyrical
Flow - Kwizikal
Structure - Lyrical
Wordplay - Lyrical
Multi's - Lyrical
Punches - Tie
Personals - Kwizikal
Closer - Lyrical

Vote - Lyrical

Good verses from both. But basically Lyricals verse dissed kwizikal more then kwizikals did lyrical, and had multi's and some nice wordplay. Good battle both u guys, Good luck next time kwizikal.
Pz..

opener= snipe
finisher= snipe
structure = kwizikal
vocab= snipe
personals= tie
multies= snipe
flow = ehhh this one is hard but kwizikal takes it
punches= snipe
VOTE=SNIPE

this was a good battle no doubt but snipe took
i think his punches hit a little harder
snipe you need to work on your structure
flow was nice from btoh good battle both of ya

hit my battle up link is= http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108681

yo i dont have to break it down l snyper had better punches and had better flow,structure was ightt......
my vote L SNYPER

Good match of talent here...

kwizikal - work on your structure for starters. You attempted the personals but just fell short of makin them connect hard, flow was Ok....nothin special, but you lacked creativity

lyrical - Also fix your structure, punches hit slightly harder and you were more creative, flow was even with kwizikal.

v/ lyrical

Both Mc's are as good as eachother but on the day lyrical came slightly harder.

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