rule(18-9) vs Neek (0-1)

10 lines mini 15 max
no feeidng,biting,recycling,crew,hate,
5 votes wins
3 ko
due 15 minutes after check

there ye go....checkin in...g'luck
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Had to do this shit mad quick lmao...good luck

my biblical-scribes, cause pivital-vibes, that create wins even in imbecils-eyes!/
watch me injure-this-guy, crimson-his-life, watch his face wince-an-divide/
infinite-strikes, while rule struggles for every inch-of-his-life, before the henchmen-arrive/
i'll pounce-an-bruise, while the crowd-approves, i'd have to eat a thousand-you, before my bowels-would-move/
throw in the towel-you-fool, before the falcons-swoop, with their talons-loose, an your found-consumed/
you're facing the pestilent-veteran, who produces "excellent-excrement", causeing you death-in-the-scent-of-it/
you're not a treacherous-resident, infact you need an extra measure-of-estrogen, so confess your pleasure-is-sex-with-men/
Battling neek? a dont do by certain-laws, "get your act together" like curtain-calls/
pray I don't start-to-focus, cause i'll just bring the phat shit...like carbs-an-hostess/

Neek '04...Who wants it?

Peaceful

This bitch bout tobe served but you'll enjoy it..you like tennis
Your from here? Cool...but your about to be served & deminished
I was readin over some of your battles and your styles messed
You were talking about jeezus...but damn..you wasn't blessed
Critics will love this battle..shit..Jay nova insists that you's chat
Wants ya in his crew..hell..
Viscosity beat ya so my crew already claims your future crew wack
15 minutes to spit blind..so im'a take a minute to softly focus man
An try to understand...you have 3 battles goin..why aint you banned...
So in this case im'a shut my computer screen down and leave this herb
Cuz if i keep goin I could hurt this (0-1) record sway..with a link..word
Keyed verse for to amuse the few who read these battles and such
To prove anybody can beat you..with skill..it doesnt take that much

ayo rule was alittel better not by much but came stronger and had better punches and was alitte clearer
my vote rule
sorry cant pole vote yet but return the favor im my latest battel.......1

yup...uppen
good luck real
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uppen number 2
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..Actuallya decent battle...both had some witty punches..

Breakdown:

Flow-Neek(rule's wasn't bad at all)
Multis-rule
Punches-Tie(both were very clever)
Personals-Tie
Meta-rule
Structure-rule(Neek your shit was all fucked up)

..good battle..but...VOTE-rule...

~Click Battle on my sig~

Uppen Numver 3
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Rule took this pretty much in every category except flow and structure those were ties, but it was a pretty weak battle I've seen ya come harder Rule, keep elevating on ya punches nice battle though but a little weak, VOTE=Rule, please hit this battle up since I did take time on ya'llz battle please VOTE, http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108019

uppen number 4
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Breakdown,
Opener:rule
Closer:rule
Flow:rule
Punches:rule
Enjoyment:rule
Personals:rule
Vote:rule

soz 4got 2drop my link: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106594
ibroke urs down,return tha favour

Neek u weren't bad or anythin its jus rule came harder, thought id show u dat u weren't wack!

Neek had the better multies and the better flow but his structure was akward as fuck. It wa still good though.The punches were a tie cause they both were at the throat, but rule's vocab didn't step up like i thought it would. Ive seen him do way better.

VOTE_Neek