I called for anyone...
He answered and asked if I'd like a round 2.
Sure.
10 - 12 lines.
Due sometime in the near future...
And hour or something like that.
Just not forever and not another day.
Good luck.
Peace
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I called for anyone...
He answered and asked if I'd like a round 2.
Sure.
10 - 12 lines.
Due sometime in the near future...
And hour or something like that.
Just not forever and not another day.
Good luck.
Peace
From Avalon ta Island, now Verbal Kent...
With all those identities...
It must be Sybil this kid represents.
Frontin a bitch, eye contact Av ain't conceivin...
But he don't turn his back...
Cuz he looks twice the pussy leavin.
Never seen this name, just his usual suspects...
But it's a poor excuse...
Cuz when he called on my callout, he hadda call collect.
And dumb enough ta wager, it just ain't fair...
That he lost all his cash...
To himself playing solitaire.
More broke than bones that fell 50 stories...
Kid costs got him in a hole...
So he spits ta get out, but all he gets is glory.
And now ya back ta me, at my face and in...
But Av, if ya gonna do that...
At least have tha courtesy ta wipe ya chin.
He keeps a closed mind, ideas bagged...
Cuz if his thoughts run away with him...
Then Avalon's gettin dragged.
So stop perpertrating brains, ya just washed, G...
Not near a Keyser Soze...
In fact ya don't even rate Kobayashi.
I'm out, leave ya dreamin in a field of dumb...
Cuz Av, ya may build ya verse...
But not one damn vote's gonna come!
Gotta head out, my man...
Please try and keep ya verse about the same length, ok.
Thanks and peace.
This haters a has been... Verb's text'll retract skin,
Born's near to garbage, see his pics? he stood next to the trash bin...
this coward'll die hard... he'll need a life guard,
by bein 35 just now freestylin to make decent start...
Verbal's sick with the flow... and I'll rip this joke,
if skill takes you places, well godamn! you'll move a inch at most...
Verb'll drop next n' make ya opticals rattle,
who would have thought a vet would rather pose more threat-
in a topical battle..?
Av closely knows talent fool... but I'll be the test of dude,
n' simply stated the set up proves I've never known the best of you...
I know ya lil on the gay side... but it's ok to have gay pride,
just don't put up any more verses... sayin how you rip guys...
and I'll let bygones be bygones... no B... no hard feelings,
n' jokes are meant to be repeated... hence ya daughters fuckin siblings...
I really hate to point out... the family life of this clown,
cause they steadily tryin to move up... while Born's steadily holdin it down...
Nice drop, Av...
Let the votes roll in!
Let ya thoughts be known.
Peace
same to you piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiimp..!
Good battle.
B2K:
From Avalon ta Island, now Verbal Kent...
With all those identities...
It must be Sybil this kid represents.
^^Good opener..i liked the personal
Frontin a bitch, eye contact Av ain't conceivin...
But he don't turn his back...
Cuz he looks twice the pussy leavin.
^^Good line..decent punch
Never seen this name, just his usual suspects...
But it's a poor excuse...
Cuz when he called on my callout, he hadda call collect.
^^Wasn't really feelin that...although it was a good punch
And dumb enough ta wager, it just ain't fair...
That he lost all his cash...
To himself playing solitaire.
^^LOL..witty i liked that
More broke than bones that fell 50 stories...
Kid costs got him in a hole...
So he spits ta get out, but all he gets is glory.
^^Okie punch
And now ya back ta me, at my face and in...
But Av, if ya gonna do that...
At least have tha courtesy ta wipe ya chin.
^^LOL...i really liked that line..made me laugh
He keeps a closed mind, ideas bagged...
Cuz if his thoughts run away with him...
Then Avalon's gettin dragged.
^^Good personal
So stop perpertrating brains, ya just washed, G...
Not near a Keyser Soze...
In fact ya don't even rate Kobayashi.
^^Okie
I'm out, leave ya dreamin in a field of dumb...
Cuz Av, ya may build ya verse...
But not one damn vote's gonna come!
^^Simple finisher but good.
Verbal Kent:
This haters a has been... Verb's text'll retract skin,
Born's near to garbage, see his pics? he stood next to the trash bin...
^^Good persoanl...nice opener
this coward'll die hard... he'll need a life guard,
by bein 35 just now freestylin to make decent start...
^^didn't like that at all
Verbal's sick with the flow... and I'll rip this joke,
if skill takes you places, well godamn! you'll move a inch at most...
^^started off gay...but flipped it nicely
Verb'll drop next n' make ya opticals rattle,
who would have thought a vet would rather pose more threat-
in a topical battle..?
^^Good line
Av closely knows talent fool... but I'll be the test of dude,
n' simply stated the set up proves I've never known the best of you...
^^good line
I know ya lil on the gay side... but it's ok to have gay pride,
just don't put up any more verses... sayin how you rip guys...
^^another witty line
and I'll let bygones be bygones... no B... no hard feelings,
n' jokes are meant to be repeated... hence ya daughters fuckin siblings...
^^okie personal..couldf of been worded differently though
I really hate to point out... the family life of this clown,
cause they steadily tryin to move up... while Born's steadily holdin it down...
^^LOL...that was a great closer...witty
Over all..This was a close battle.
I'm going to go with Born to Kill..I found he was a little wittier and had more consistant lines.
Vote. B2k
sad to say, i think avalon took this
b2k had a good verse, and better personals
but to me, av took it with the garbage line, and holdin it down
the line about b2ks daughter/sibling was harsh too
vote:avalon
punchs: avalon
meta: avalon
flow: tie
structure: ...
personal: avalon
enjoy: tie
vote: av
good battle..born came real nice..but av had the harder punches/personals..
n' jokes are meant to be repeated... hence ya daughters fuckin siblings...
Lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108959
hit that up please
She doesn't have any siblings, though...
That's misdirected.
But still a great fuckin personal shot.
Props.
It's been a week or so...
Uppin for more votes...
Drop ya links, blah, blah, blah...
We wanna know who won dis shit!
Peace
From Avalon ta Island, now Verbal Kent...
With all those identities...
It must be Sybil this kid represents.
^nice personal....creative
Frontin a bitch, eye contact Av ain't conceivin...
But he don't turn his back...
Cuz he looks twice the pussy leavin.
^well this is a punch......but is just and ok punch not really feelin it...
Never seen this name, just his usual suspects...
But it's a poor excuse...
Cuz when he called on my callout, he hadda call collect.
^i like good connection to the movie.....and an Ok punch
And dumb enough ta wager, it just ain't fair...
That he lost all his cash...
To himself playing solitaire.
^hmmm.....nah.....its ok....
More broke than bones that fell 50 stories...
Kid costs got him in a hole...
So he spits ta get out, but all he gets is glory.
^didn't think this line flowed as well as the rest....ok punch though
And now ya back ta me, at my face and in...
But Av, if ya gonna do that...
At least have tha courtesy ta wipe ya chin.
He keeps a closed mind, ideas bagged...
Cuz if his thoughts run away with him...
^ooh this is tuff cause you didn't finish the thought in the line...
Then Avalon's gettin dragged.
So stop perpertrating brains, ya just washed, G...
Not near a Keyser Soze...
In fact ya don't even rate Kobayashi.
^good play on the movie again nice punch.....
I'm out, leave ya dreamin in a field of dumb...
Cuz Av, ya may build ya verse...
But not one damn vote's gonna come!
^field of dreams i assume that's OG lol i like the closer.....
This haters a has been... Verb's text'll retract skin,
Born's near to garbage, see his pics? he stood next to the trash bin...
^ahahah nice punch personal...good
this coward'll die hard... he'll need a life guard,
by bein 35 just now freestylin to make decent start...
^well this is a personal i wasn't really feelin it
Verbal's sick with the flow... and I'll rip this joke,
if skill takes you places, well godamn! you'll move a inch at most...
^ok nice punch
Verb'll drop next n' make ya opticals rattle,
who would have thought a vet would rather pose more threat-
in a topical battle..?
^hmm nice i like it but don't hate on topicals..ehhe
Av closely knows talent fool... but I'll be the test of dude,
n' simply stated the set up proves I've never known the best of you...
^its an ok line.....punchin is good
I know ya lil on the gay side... but it's ok to have gay pride,
just don't put up any more verses... sayin how you rip guys...
^ooo gay stuff.....i onno its mixed feelings
and I'll let bygones be bygones... no B... no hard feelings,
n' jokes are meant to be repeated... hence ya daughters fuckin siblings...
^well this was mean but a good punch i guess
I really hate to point out... the family life of this clown,
cause they steadily tryin to move up... while Born's steadily holdin it down...
^nice closer.....this is gonna be tough.....
i think born to kill was very creative with his verse but enough to the point that he came a little softer than normal....Verbal had a hardcore verse but at times it was a little simplistic with the multis...still its a battle so i think punches count more and i gotta go with verbal no hate both y'all hit this up its a good read...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110264
^note i made this vote before i saw b2k voted against me.....Bitch!!! jk no hate one...
Good drops....
B2K - Nice flow like always and was quite creative. You had some nice hard hittin punclines.....I liked the pussy leavin one.
Avalon - Also nice drop. Better personals and nice flow but not as good punches. But the one about B2K's daughter got it for ya.....that was harsh.
v/ Avalon/Verbal Kent
Can ya's hit up my battle against .:FiorZ:. coz it's a crew battle which we wanna get finished with....links in my sig. thanks.
aight my vote here goes to born to kill
i thought that his verse was a lil bit more creative but it was really close
i also thought that his punches and perosnls were a lil bit better
thios was a good battle but i feel that born to kill won it for a better verse and better punches
no hate hit the battle in the sig up
very good battle i have to say BTK where did u pull that verse from very nice..
but in all reality i have to go with Verbal Kent..just oput did u in this one..but man BTK u dont come up with this shit on the regular..or maybe I havent peeped your recent battles..anyways..
v/Av