explicitot v weezy snypz

Your Rules............................................. .....................................ai

You cant be SERIOUS, You not a lyricist
take in damage rhymes makin you DELERIOUS/

NOT HOT ,rhymes like aspermless cock!! ....
.nigga you'll never rise to the top/ 1

you like a broken lamp, AINT NO USE ,i
f you battlin' me than thats PAIN YOU CHOOSE/

pain i bring , let you get more than a "lift"
my words are a gift yours keep fallin like a bottomless pit/ 2

throw a couple lines at like nines clap you
you the type let sumone blind give you a tattoo

nice verse kid check in -

stop ya bitchin n complainin, the more you whine in ya rhymes the more u be playa hatin//
bein around you is worse dan when its rainin i'd rather be soakin wet den listen to yo u n what u sayin//

you da worst type o nigga, fuckin around talkin large//
usin ya prewites actin bigger than biggie biggie tha retard//

gettin a bit, weezie, well fuck my rhymez is hard enough to make you sleepy//
fuckin winnin dis battle? u dreamin, i'm lyrically standin over ya bead takin a peepee//

thats what id like to do, drop you quick and take a piss//
cuz we know you cant take a fist, so wake get a grip n smell the urine you grimy fuckin bitch//

whats wit snypes? r u claimin to be a snyper... son u probably aint even outta diapers//
which means you too young for dis shit, go back to rappin ya baby cyphers//

this bitch got it twisted, thinkin he could penetrate explicit//
killin you would be a privledge and if i dont do it i'd hate to miss it//

Originality - Both
Punches - Neither.. werent feelin any
Personals - Explicitot.. more direct.. used name flips
Flow - Weezy.. Explicitot was too choppy
Structure - Weezy.. more consistant
Opener - Neither
Closer - Explicitot.. nice use of multis

VoTe = Explicitot

Had more to go on with Explicitot.. Weezy was way too basic an the structure looked pre-skool.. flow was aight tho.

Drop ur vote here plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107052

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not many punches in this battle but it was a nice battle and I liked the flow from weezy but Explicitot got this one barely by personals and liek Tek said closer nice use of multis so My VOTE=Explicitot, can u both hit this battle up honestly in my sig, please it's getting mad slept and of course I did take time 2 vote on yours, please VOTE

well explained da way it should b i preciate dat uppin votes dont sleep on this ma'fuka..........................

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yo ex had harder punches
bolth had flow
ex had mor multis
over all ex won da battle