10 lines
i set up
you spit first
NO!!!
crew votes,
d/r votes,
hate votes,
1 line votes,
b/s votes,
etc etc
good luck
i'll spit 10 mins later!!!
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10 lines
i set up
you spit first
NO!!!
crew votes,
d/r votes,
hate votes,
1 line votes,
b/s votes,
etc etc
good luck
i'll spit 10 mins later!!!
iight check it.
Dis kid thinks he 007 da only thing he can spy on is men wit der pants down//
Fuk havin a license to kill he got a one in jumpin around in his mums dressing gown//
Im suprised dis kid can spit 10 lines he has trouble keepin things up i think a case of premeture ejaculation//
Have ur name in my sig im like predetor i take ur name as a decoration//
Bring ur free styling carrer to a quick short end ur tryin to do some thing u wast gifted to "do"//
U had a few wins so what no1 cares ill beat u here wit my rhymes "through and through"//
Im still climbin da ranks wit this win it will up me alot, im taken all the big names im still "aspiring"//
Ill leave u below me still at the 1st height still "atempting"//
if u like horror movies lets go to Freddy vs. Jason//
when i come into the room and u at the mic ur heart will start racin//
iight done not much but what eva waiting fo ur drop
* http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/member.php?userid=24829 *
^peep this first^
im battlin this kid thats sixteen!!!! but he born in 1984,
he must be a lying motherfucker, he ages no one knows,
i hit with flames, spin an burn you at 360 degrees,
he aint praying when men got him on his knees,
XLG dosent exist, its pnuenatic, the name change u missed,
he guy gon bleed easily, like a 6 years old weak wrist,
i bet your proud of your win!! no subsantial reason,
he was 'week' as fuck, you won him in herbal season,
merk ever single mc to step to,.. but im still walking,
im the one that silence emcces claims stop em talking,
iight upp upp upp uppin fo votes..................
merk ever single mc to step to,.. but im still walking,*
im the one that silence emcces claims stop em talking,
^my last lines was based on his sig^
Exception: you got a LONG way to go, son. There weren't any punches in your verse at all, even though you DID have a couple attempts at personals. Nothing in ya verse really even caught any attention -all filler. Gotta get some punches into your shit.
Double-0: This verse was AIGHT, and as long as your ass has been around, I know you could've come way harder, wit' a wack newb, I guess it didn't REALLY take much anyway. Good personals tho.
Open: 007
Close: 007
Wordplay: ehh
Vocab: Exception
Creativity: 007
Enjoyment: 007 (by far)
Punches: 007
Vote: 007
1st time uppin.............................
Opener - 007
Flow - 007
Vocab - 007
Structure - 007
Punches - 007
Closer - 007
Vote - 007
Exception didnt have ne punches, I read it twice looking for them, and 007 had some nice hard hittin punches. I could say more but thats a good enough reason too vote for 007.
Good battle.
007 took this with a tighter format and better flow...
Punches were good, not "woah", but good and steady.
Wordplay was limited.
Personals were on target though.
Helped his verse alot.
Exception had really stretched as shit lines...
His vocab was good, but the wordplay was blah...
The punches also seemed forced, and very weak.
Better all around, Double...Double 0 Seven.
not really close here, a merkin.....
Exception all u had was bad structure big words and played punches, I wasnt feelin ur stuff a lil bit....elevate
007 had a nice short structure wit smooth punchy flo, along wit OK punches and some creative metiphores, not much else to say, double gets this one pretty handily..
vote - 007
ok battle,
yea im in agreement that the punches wern't thaty great but was enufgf to take for double o seven.
he had better personals and some what a better verse,
exceptional you should of had a better structure and shorten your lines so they don't seem stretched.