rules
10 lines, no more no less
i set up
you spit first
usual rules,
im sure you know what they are by now!!!
p.s
goodluck!!!
Printable View
rules
10 lines, no more no less
i set up
you spit first
usual rules,
im sure you know what they are by now!!!
p.s
goodluck!!!
im at school so il spit later!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!**************************************** *************
aiight man..............................................
.........................................
uppin.........so u can spit..............................
ayt im spittin now sorry 4 da delay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yo check it bitch
No Matter How Hard This Kids Tryin My Spit's Flyin At Alias
Finds The Bitch And Hits Quick Gives Him Fits Writhin In A Ditch Dyin
Master Plan To Collapse Ya Glands With Cannons When I Blast Ya Man
So Ya Crashland Like A Legless Rapper That Cant Stand Up To The Task At Hand
Pride In Your Bitches Eyes When She Realize What's Between My Thighs
Fantasized bout My Surprise Since Your Little Guy's Just Minimized
At Least You're Tryin But Cease Your Cryin Please Its A Beast You're Fightin
Reachin Rite Inside My Levis Jeans Dyin To Beat The Lion
Explosive Lungs Corrosive Tongue Consider This Post Closed Youre Done
My Flows Just One Just Another Victim Reign*Mans Roasted Son
ayt im done u spit
this kid, he be in the 'text book' of 'free agents'*
but it ok kid, the shit aint nothing major....
Xtreme Lyrical Gangsters have you played,**
and my opening 3 lines, just had you slayed,
i seen ur raps, an we should have pinkslips on,
an that aint no dress, flip word, an leave you spun,
if i tried in this battle, it would be a waste of lines,
force feed you my watch, give you a rough time,
with a record like urs i'd go away and die,
your a disgrace of molecules, a waste of life!!!
* http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/member.php?u=25260
his sig says text book, his sig- free agent
**XLG, Rbs wackest crew, he was in an now hes aint an tryin to get back in!!!
overall...a very weak battle....
structure- Alias(much better compact not stretched)
punches- Alias(Thats all he had...but the delivered nicely)
flo- Aliase(Rain was stretched and way off key)
Multi's- Rain(he had more solid ones....and more overall)
Meti4- Rain(Alias didnt have much here)
overall- Alias....he simply had a better battle verse here...
not good from either- both elevate...*1*
Reign Man Had this hands down, Alias, he beat you just because you piggheaded enough to say your the next pac, but he also ripped you w/ punchlines and meta's
v/ Reign man
You are referring to the wrong verse... so vote is gone.
-Axe
were the fuck did, i say i was the next pac, im havin this shit disallowed^^
fuck off alias that was a good vote, he had a explanation!!
lets get more votes up in here!!
btw wat the fuck r u talkin bout textbook or xlg 4??
A clear example of a d/r vote..it's been reported.Quote:
Reign Man Had this hands down, Alias, he beat you just because you piggheaded enough to say your the next pac, but he also ripped you w/ punchlines and meta's
v/ Reign man
Alias my Bad Dogg, I accidenlty read "TheWHitefLAMES" and I didn't notice the avatar,my bad , on the real, Mods Sorry bout this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ill break this down line for line
Reign mans verse
No Matter How Hard This Kids Tryin My Spit's Flyin At Alias
Finds The Bitch And Hits Quick Gives Him Fits Writhin In A Ditch Dyin
nice wordplay here
Master Plan To Collapse Ya Glands With Cannons When I Blast Ya Man
So Ya Crashland Like A Legless Rapper That Cant Stand Up To The Task At Hand
nice wordplay and multies
Pride In Your Bitches Eyes When She Realize What's Between My Thighs
Fantasized bout My Surprise Since Your Little Guy's Just Minimized
At Least You're Tryin But Cease Your Cryin Please Its A Beast You're Fightin
Reachin Rite Inside My Levis Jeans Dyin To Beat The Lion
again nice use of multies.. the disses didnt hit that hard though
Explosive Lungs Corrosive Tongue Consider This Post Closed Youre Done
My Flows Just One Just Another Victim Reign*Mans Roasted Son
overall this verse was filled with alot of good wordplay.. and pretty decent disses i give this verse a 7.5/10
aliases verse
this kid, he be in the 'text book' of 'free agents'*
but it ok kid, the shit aint nothing major....
Xtreme Lyrical Gangsters have you played,**
and my opening 3 lines, just had you slayed,
the wordplay in these rhmyes was pretty basic nothing major.. and the disses were pretty basic nothing mindblowing here
i seen ur raps, an we should have pinkslips on,
an that aint no dress, flip word, an leave you spun,
if i tried in this battle, it would be a waste of lines,
force feed you my watch, give you a rough time,
with a record like urs i'd go away and die,
your a disgrace of molecules, a waste of life!!!
overall this verse was pretty basic there was nothing real special bout the rhymers plus the disses were pretty simple and plain
overall vote: im voting for reign man in this battle.. he had better wordplay.. better uses of mulites.. and more clever lines than alias had.. vote reign man
ayt uppin!!!
drop ur links and il repay the favour!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!