1 round 16 lines
3-0 ko 5 wins
spit
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1 round 16 lines
3-0 ko 5 wins
spit
checkin in..
Man check in my fault for openin up one
Your Words Wouldn't Be As Hot As Mine Even If You Heated Em'/
This Newb's are Forbiden Fruit, Human Nature Makes Me Eat Em'/
Look Kid I Submerge Hits...Your Words Cant Hurt This/
To Post Is Worthless,My Puns Stir Wits In Turn To Burn Kids/
"W"?You Wont Earn This Cause Like Pornstars...Your Full Blown/
Victory Was Postponed,This Battles' A Wrap So Jus Leave It Alone/
You Could Be Throwin Stones But You Strike No Fear Hoe/
Ya Skills Appear?No..Cause Wackness Isnt Sub-Zero/
Drop This With Hot Spits?...Kid You Cant Spark Shit/
Not Even If You Passed Gases To Lit Matches Like You Farted/
These Hits Come Wit Pain & L's With Your Name But Get This.../
This Num-Skull Knows Shit So Ill Stitch-Brains For This Knit-Wit/
Switchin Shifts,Like Hittin Gears Kid Ill Make You Double Clutch/
Mumble Much? Or Has Your Tongue Started To Double Dutch/
Huddled-Up,Im Callin Plays & Your Headed For The End-Zone/
Broken Phones Dont Send Tones But Listen Closely For Your Cheers Holmes/*
*=No Dial Tone...Phones Dead...You Only Hear Silence...Get It?
holla........
damn dowg dis pos to be off da top if i knew u wuz gonna write some shit i would have too but fuck it aint no shame in my game im a champion
yeah all I read was a bunch a blah you aint making no noise
I gotta hunch y'ur ass an a wild nights gettin down with the boys
unlike you I drop Rhythmic hints and give up the real secret
cause I'm the best kept everyone knows how tight I keep it
the flow I speak with is focused on aim and shoot
and wrapped tighter then the laces on them white boy boots
I'm ancient rap royalty the original like king tut
you aint my dog so lemme show you quick how i ring muts
are you garggle'n seamen or can you really sing nuts
I bring cuts lacerations abrasions and fractures
cast this faggit from battle see if theres somethin' fa'actors
cause I can match y'urs with out even a second thought
I KO* any Production an like 80's crack I'm still new on the block
the shit you cum up with to spit I can tell you was chewin a cock
heres a hint rythmic this is gonna be the first dub I see
and for you the menus serving L's courtesy the dub I Zee
* KO any production K~O, "N" "E" productions in his sig
i show you how its done riden on me playa plese you done battlein me i rhyme words you cant even timetorhymeQuote:
Originally Posted by WiZ~KiD
^^^^^^^ the fuck?
Uppin dis for votes!!
(2) Uppin dis for votes!! dont sleep on da battle!!!!!
I'm still new to the site but I'm hoping that it dont take a week and shit to get a battle voted on....thanks for the battle rythmic good spit :thumbup:
^^^^^uppin for the first and only time `1
both emcees main problem is lack of direct punches............both cats were focusin on flowin and sayin how tight they were............its a battle ppl.........not a written spit/keystyle
dunno thought battle was weak but R.H edged this with a bit more creative lines, basically played, but it proved to be the better verse in my eyes
vote = RH
Breakdown:
punches - Rh
personals - none
flow - Rh
creativity - Rh
opener - Wk
closer - Rh
OVERALL - Rh
Both need to elevate and concentrate on punches more than flow, even then Wk's was choppy and Rh....take the /'s out of your verse coz not many people like them.
Anyway....since I took the time hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106525
if you say there was no personals it means you didnt read or didnt get my shit ....new board its whateva man......"I KO* any Production an like 80's crack I'm still new on the block"
(3) Uppin dis battle............................thanx for da feed back!!!