aight son........
10 lines
house rules
verses due tonight at 12 est.........
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aight son........
10 lines
house rules
verses due tonight at 12 est.........
CHECKIN IN...........
i got a lil writers block goin currently so ill drop later..........
waitin on ur check in though...........
check check check.yo bitch imma spit rite now.......i aint gonna be home tonight,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Yo wat up dis shit shuld be fun,if i wasnt horny and drunk nigga u wouldn't exist my son,turn off ur mic and go back 2 skool ur careers ova its done...yous a fuckin bitch ill take out my cock and dick smack u make u think my shyt weigh a ton..
Dis bitch is a fuckin phony just look at is profile he addmits he a fakeassgangsta...couldnt think of otha words 2 describe urself???I got one u a pussy ass wanksta...
Nigga if u didnt wanna battle u shoulda just run,hop da train, take the bus,fuck da plane...but instead u accepted sum1 call da fuckin institute this bitch is insane...got dis fag so shook nigga lost his brain...but its all good cuz i got dis niggas mom on my dik thinkin it a candycane...
i wouldnt be ur pops if ur mom hadnt walked around ass if her twat was free...im ur father nigga why cant accept it and see...im done with dis battle so ~wat up now fuckin pussy~
wun bitch
ha ha aight..........i guess ill drop now.........check it out..........
if u observe-my-punches, u realize im ill and keep winnin battles, and im just like a school food person, always "servin-some-lunches"/
u deserve-my-touch, cause when u called me out, u knew what was comin and already decided to "reserve-the-crutchs"/
in bitch slapped, u claimed ud win cause u live-in-the-east, but u obviously hadnt seen me serve kids, cause ur the fourth cat that im "givin-a-feast"/
i outlive-the-deceased, i never die, and u blame bein touched the reason for ur wack skills, but dawg, seriously "forgive-the-priest"/
i arrest-queers, that means u now gotta record, but u gonna be leavin this site after this battle anyway cause u just a "guest-on-here/
i suggest-u-disappear, cause ur just wack as hell, i could continually serve ya, but ull never be able to "digest"-ur-fear/
this guys age is unkown just like his occupation, its quite sad when cats is waitin for the day u stop to start throwin a celebration/
u dont got any admiration, and wit ur combination of words ur family is beggin u to quit so ur wack punches wont get passed down to the next generation/
i make ya not-calm, cause ur next on my list, im takin ova ya family and i already got-ya-mom/
when i spit i drop-bombs, this cat got his only skills for christmas, a website called rappingfordummies dot-com/
EXPLANATIONS-
1st bar - lunch ladys serve lunches
2nd bar - in my callout thread for another guy he jumped in and said somethin like, "i dont gotta worry bout this cause im from the east"
3rd bar - his names gestonrier, i just switched it up to be guest on here
4th bar - in his profile his age and occupation arent listed
5th bar - self explanatory
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LETS GET SOME VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!
Hard battle to decide heres the breakdown
Flow:both...Very long strucutres...So i have to give it to both So they wont hate
Structure:neither
Punches+personals:yo whats up....had this he had more punches and personals...All were seen IN HIS Huge as structure
multis:neither
Overall:yo had this...Thats about it
flow:neither cause you strected your bars
punches:yo wut up
personals:yo wut up
thats pretty much all there was not such a good battle ...
vote=yo wut up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...00#post1074000
vote on this battle please
^^^thanx for the votes.........but prophet, i did have multis holmes.........thanx though.........
UPPIN #1 !!!!!!!!!!!!
UPPIN # 2 !!!!!!!!!
CMON NOW FOOS, LETS GET SOME VOTES ALL UP IN HERRRRRE!!!!!!!!!!
peace.............
UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!
CMON QUIT SLEEPIN ON DIS.........
I VOTE ON TONS OF BATTLES, SO CMON YALL..........
UPPIN # 4!!!!!!!!!!!!
CMON NOW............JUST DROP YO DAMN OPINION...........
peace...............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105697
i thouhg wut up took this battle
he had better flow
an better structure
kids not half bad
im in a hurry so dont mind thee typos
Vo-te-YO qutup
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=105697
^^holla at this i need ya honest oPINON..PLz..PC SHIT SIK
yo what up got this battle with better punches..better structure..although he had some l o n g a s s l i n e s..it was enough to get him the win..gest..or whatever needs to elevate..work on structure..punches..you had a personal..but it was weak..yo what up..have some mediocre punches..
my vote~yo what up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...78#post1074978
UPPIN # 5!!!!!!!!!!
LAST ONE..........
YO GEST U KNOW U CAN UP DIS TOO.......CMON NOW..........
LETS GET SOME VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH............
I vote - Yo What Up
Punches: Yo
Multis: Yo
Wordplay: Yo
Personals: Yo
This is a one-sided battle, but Yo, you need a little more creativity, some of those punches are played.
i arrest-queers, that means u now gotta record, but u gonna be leavin this site after this battle anyway cause u just a "guest-on-here/
i suggest-u-disappear, cause ur just wack as hell, i could continually serve ya, but ull never be able to "digest"-ur-fear/
Best Bar of the battle.