Dialect OTYP vs BlackGhost

aight rules are as follows
no hate d/r or crew votes
no biting feeding or freeposting
verses due 30min after checkin
you must check in before you post
10line min
15line max
goodluck


get at me

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evrytime this boi flows he gets off topic
he'll prolly read my verse and decide not ta drop his/
battlin me kid results in a 5-0, thats me knockin him out
you couldnt spit hard shit rappin wit rocks in ya mouth/
if i approch the mic that means bombs are comin
i be on such gangsta shit you hear it and ya mom starts thuggin/
this bitch aint black but claims it, i think he white
he aint keystyle what he post i call a pre-write/
nows ya start and the same shit for ya end my friend
*flow* ull crash you down so hard youll never *surf* the web again/
this bitch is, and imbread, spawned by insest
note ta ghost you suck at rappin find a different intrest/
you fuckin wit me it seems you a dumb ghost
cuz i been ridin this before you rplyed ta dis you only has one post/
see bitch you cant hit me cuz im hard ta spot
i leave you danglin from the cielin like that avatar you got/
im so hot last time i grabbed the mic it started smokin,
but you went ta pick it up and instently it was frozen/
not chance ta beat me for you not wit ya best hopin,
i verbaly murder and then you realy be floatin/(ghost float duh)

get at me

^^ nice drop..

il peep this battle when other kid drops

holla back

PEEP ME AN XTREME DAIGNOSISI SHITS TITE..

hes a fag tho

but ..wuteva

PEE Pit ill be back..
late honestly tho...

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uppin so ghost sees the forum hopes thats ok
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uppin cuz ghost cant find the forum srry
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ok im checkin in
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u steppin 2 me, its really not an issue,
cuz i'll blow a hole in ya like u was made of cheap tissue/
my flow is high climatic and it's really intelligent,
the shit u be spittin is just straight up irrelevant/
when you see a black coupe slowly ridin' on ya side hide,
cuz i'll roll the windows down and now it's a drive-by/
i walk down ya block niggaz scatter like leaves,
i'll pop more holes in ya than swiss cheese/
i ain't Jay-Z but i got 99 problems,
pop 99 shot and your lives i robbed em'/
my rhymes strike lkie lightning and clap like thunder,
u soft like white bread so i'll call you wonder/
this shit is way too hot for u to handle,
u like cake..... but i blew out ya candles/
u spittin against me well i'm certain you'll lose,
cuz my wordplay even got Bill Gates confused dude/

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Dialect got this

battlin me kid results in a 5-0, thats me knockin him out
you couldnt spit hard shit rappin wit rocks in ya mouth/

was quite nice and i feel even tho he didnt have alot of wordplay in general his punches were stronger

but for the 2nd guy he had a nice versefor his first battle...i liked the cheese line lol....

but nice battle

v/Dialect

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yo dialect if my vote would count it would b 4 u. cause everything was better and u destroyed him ..............



vote dialect otyp

heres the breakdown....

Flow=Dialect....His was smaller and simple
Strcuture=Dialect...simple...
complex=dialect....again...
Punches=very weak punches....dialect though
personal=no comment....
overall=dialect....

yup he got this.....

hit my battles up Peace...i spent time on this....return the favor honestly.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104513
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103792

Dialect
Pretty mediocre overall..
But then again u didnt need much to beat this kid..
You basically edged every catagory..
Better punches basically, include some more,
personals though. ok
Overall ok

Blackghost
..to simple.
add more complexity.
Your structure was ok..u just need to work on punches etc..
You'll get better. nice try.
Overall below average.

vote: Dialect