Telekinetic vs Straight Ace

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20 min. deadline..
No feedin', recyclin, bitin..
No d/r,beef,hate votes..
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You couldn't match my skills with sticks an flint as your rhapsody
Rap Bible states not to, but still you commit alphabetical blasphemy
An I seen your in the crew of seven shadows, the crew of seven ass holes
Against me you couldn't even grab the fuckin mic with seven lassos
You're a lightweight man, born in April one to the six
Couldn't build a decent rhyme with pockets of bricks
Im hotter than hells days, the ways im blazin the tracks
Your as cold as dead Eskimos, no way your meltin the wax (wax = a record)
You got deaf ears to the music, you have to now admit defeat
This guy could piss on Tyson, an still won't be feelin the beat

you gonna drop?
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Originally posted by Telekinetic:
I bet you got a crew for them an you im slayin bars
The only aces that you got is when your playin cards
--Against Skrollz
Shud've saved that bar.. followed the trend & posted it vs me..
But every Ace comes in multiples..just like ur losses apparently..
The only time this kid wins. 'period'..is once in 4 weeks..
& records made of glass..only way he's breakin winnin streaks..
Inflict this kid he claims telekinetic..kid can't even think clear..
Pull'd a trick out his hat..never thought he'd draw this Loss right here.
Kid tried for personals..Failed..so i can't flip...... this kids dead..
..Kid is so ugly...
He's the reason they implied that rule against newb pic threads..
Totaled more wordplay in 1 bar then this kid in his entire manifest..
..Your material..its wack so i guess it's truely 'self expressed'..
Kid wont come close..he's out of place..you dont belong..
..Walk over u..grind ur face..take my fifth win..
............................. ...................now i truely 'stand strong'

Fucking drop already I took like 20 min and you have almost
had a damn hour come on................................................ .....
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punches- ace.....by alot...his hit alot harder
flo- ace...jus barely....tele jus chopped up a stretched a lil bit
wordplay- tele....it wasnt any thing great...but he had more
multi's- ace....at the end...the grindin face thing was good
meti4's- ace....pretty even except he didnt come as played
personals- ace....had this covered from the get-go

overall- ace.....not really that close.....tele-elevate

Wow...

Ace was fuckin this thing up untill the last line...

Didn't vibe with it.

But, man...

Everything before it was like, damn!

Especially that "newb pic" line.

Tele came tight, not bad at all...

Just didn't have the muscle that Ace had.

His shit didn't hit near as hard.

Better structure...
But not a better verse.
Sorry, Tele.

Peace

Holla back...
Born vs. Blak Woods

Thanks for voting anyway guys
Nice battle Ace
Ohh by the way I seen that first line comin before you even posted I was like fuck he might dig an use that lol

Ohh an if you guys dont care vote on that battle I had with Scrollz
Its been slept on bad yo

opener:Ace
Closer:Ace could have hit harder just by re-wording but good
punches:Ace
Flow:Ace
Originality:ACe


I get sick of people recycling words that are in the air but if you're going to do it at least dress it up...................I did'nt feel like tele came wit something new it was kind of like you were forcing some things.
Overall it was'nt a weak battle just was 'nt a great one, behind me being new I did'nt understand somethings but I'll catch on later down the road
This voe goes to ACe

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Well.....what can I say?

Ace you had a vicious flurry of punches that increased thoroughout your drop but faded on the last line. (Kind of a finger flick to knock him out with?) You had some real standout punches and you hit really hard line for line.

Telekenetic you tried to come hard but you were forcing a lot of the multi's and the opener was a little vague. You punched effectively, but you didn't have the wit to match.

Vote........Ace.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=103997

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yo ace had this all the way good verse man liked the punches just work on personals but nice,tele u wrnt close man u gota hit harder......................plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...35#post1055135 ......thx..........pz