KaYNe vs Problem C

:shoot: Aight I made the topic i got bored while thinking up some things floating around in my head right now.

I agree with the rules
since i challenged I drop first

Im trying a Odd Style trying to get more versa

1st Things 1st Dog i aint hatin "n" Shit/
Da names takin....n u just lost 2 Quip/
Thats 2 things K.... needs 2 FIX/
"O YEH STOP SNORTING PIXIE STICKS!!//
Your flows are trash asshole... u should stop/
or i"ll will treat u like a bum and throw u in a box//
my bad for another change of subject/
i get more pussy then u "n" i cant enter clubs yet/
your just a faggot for hire//
i should strangle u can see can u rap through the wire//

Aight thats 10 man i had so much shit i probly lost but im just expermenting but if i beat u with this vs u need 2 stop

hold on, hold on..... i aint lose to Quip. Its 1-1 & we waitin for votez.....

Anyway, lets go.



Ive never seen a verse as shit as that, you must spit outta that picture in ya avatar/
Im on a higher level than you, you couldnt ever roll with me, even if you have-a-car/
Your lifes your only problem & ill be sure to solve it while you stand amazed, observin-these-scenes/
Givin food to bad people in restaurants is the only time your ever servin-the-fiends/ (!)
Man, I get a lot less excited battlin you than if I sit down and read-thrillers/
His talents yet to sprout, yet im 'destroyin this herbs' particles like im spittin 'weed-killer'/
No skill in ya bars & i cant see none inside as i break your exterior like a cracked-tile/
You gotta admit kid, I killed this battle and walked all over your wack-style/
Forget battlin alone kid, bring Young Maf along for the massacre coz I shunt-gangs/
No wonder you came so wack, its 'pointless' tryna win this like 'vampires wit blunt-fangs'/



(!) On his profile, it says that his occupation is 'serving the fiends'.



Yeah, theres some wack fillers in there, but its enough.
Good luck problem..... Uppin 4 votez.

#1........ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uppin This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


We could do with some votez in this!


I cant poll vote, but drop a link & ill still hit it up with a fair vote.

#2........ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uppin This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


We could do with some votez in this!


I cant poll vote, but drop a link & ill still hit it up with a fair vote.

Pretty one-sided..

Problem C's verse was kinda wack... short bars with little impact, punches were played if any.. might just be me but the pixie sticks line? wtf... nothing standoutish really..
Kayne came harder.. bars were quite stretched tho, messin the overall flow up.. some decent similies in there, a personal at least.. better vocab etc... better in most catergorys...

Vote - KaYNe

Return the favour with an honest vote -http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=104125

Thanks for the vote Harlem.
& you werent the only one who didnt get the pixie stick line :huh:


We need more votez in this battle!


I cant poll vote, but drop a link & ill still hit it up with a fair vote.


#3........ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uppin This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this battle was so one sided its not even funny.. kayne destroyed problem c

PROBLEM C- your verse really didnt have any hard disses or punchlines that stood out.. and you really had weak wordplay like lines like this "your just a faggot for hire//
i should strangle u can see can u rap through the wire//"

you could do a lot better than that


KAYNE- you took this battle easily with personal disses and a nice use of multies.. the only problem with your verse was that some of your lines were stretched i dont hold flow against someone that much on text battles.. cuz you could probably flow that.. but next time.. try and reduced your lines

VOTE:KAYNE

Thanks for the vote Smiley.

We need more votez in this battle!

I cant poll vote, but drop a link & ill still hit it up with a fair vote.

#4........ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uppin This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cummon people, we need votez!!!

I cant poll vote, but drop a link & ill still hit it up with a fair vote & break it down 4 ya!

#5........ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Uppin This 4 The Last Time !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KAyne killed this other dude. better verse with harder punches. prop the most one sided battle i have ever voted on. better everything, Kayne just on another level!

Vote - Kayne

please return a Honest/vote
http://www.creationscience.com/onlinebook/FAQ25.html

I hope you dont count this as me uppin the battle, coz its already as far up as it can go, but Eki, that link you just dropped wasnt to a battle.

Thanks for the vote by the way..... and if you wanna drop the actualy link, ill check it out.

hey .... HAHA i knwo that i just though it would make interasting reading for you ;)

heres the acctualy link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104606

ROFL^

there is only really one winner, an thats problem, nah only kiddin.

problem looked like you didnt even try!!!
but kayne, you need to shorten your lines, they were retty stretched, but you spat well.

peace

kayne took this battle easily, he had good punches, personals and some decent multis...the only thing i saw, 007 pointed it out to, is that your lines are stretched a little too much...fix that and it's all good...problem c, you said you were trying a new style to see if it worked and it didn't so switch it up til you find something comfortable...work on your punches, make them creative and use personals, try to stay at your opponent more....one.