How Do U Plea?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101684
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...27#post1031827
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...40#post1031840

*completly fictional*
(talkin)
yo jus got out yesterday an de
put me on 4 1st degree murder, haha
fuck dat, we goin out in a blaze nigga, haha
letz ride!

bitches actin suspitous, twitchin -n- actin malesious
whistle my whole crew in, we gonna leave em all blisstered
yall niggaz must got me twisted, if ya think that ill miss ya
dese hollows ul follow ur ass, like some heat seakin missles
wrist poppin, knockin on doors like sum evil jehovas witness
Marry Christmas snitches, courts ejerned, i jus dismissed it
seems da prosecusion aint got no1 breathin 2 testify
just call a miss trial judge, an dese slugs wont end ya life
haha, ill neva see one mutha fuckin day behind bars
criminal outlaw at large, worst plauge in da US sinse Sarz
even da CIA, an DEA got involved, multiple murders unsolved
multiple innoscents mauled and hauled off in ambulance cars
but it was all 4 a cause, i was set up in da 1st trial
da only reason i killed da rest was 2 escape 25 2 Life

this piece was just 2 experiment on what
people would do 2 escape jail time
and who would blame em
have u seen Oz
haha

dude, aside from the fact that this was played subject matter, half the lines didnt rhyme, the sars line was good, but the rest needs multis and imagery and vocab.

elavate and keep posting.