aiight
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no crew, d/r, b/s, 1 line etc etc votes
now swayin, bitchin etc etc
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aiight
10 lines
no crew, d/r, b/s, 1 line etc etc votes
now swayin, bitchin etc etc
i burn through ya retina, emblazen your eyes with pain,
don't ya see, when i key up, i disgrace you anemic brain,
an insane, mental, state, is were you's gettin left, (prof)
also behind, as the verbal battle, here gets stretched,
you like a mental midget, vrtually no I.Q whatsoever,
im seasonin the storm, like i cook up the bad weather,
ready to unlease metaphorical, acidcal rain like punches,
use reference to the bradys, i can use the word bunches,
unlocking verbal, locks, discovering the weakness of MC's,
leave virtusos, torso, in 3 sections, arms, chest an knees,
My bullets leave u Leakin-an-bleedin, ‘~‘ send u seez-n-reatreatin,
Wit this disease-im-releasin, have u runnin like u was ‘seein-‘a‘-demon‘!!
I’m feedin-then-fleein, c I’l battle wit rusted-flows an still bust-ya-nose,
Ur face disgusts-the-hoes, an you’re the one to go an-trust-ya-foes~
It’s a must-to-know, u can comply~an~deny, truth hurts but I’ll Devise-these-lies,
u’d have to rise-to-reply then fly-to-the-sky, Just to make us ~ see~ eye‘-to‘-eye
I’ll Surprise-these-guys, Ur bars... I blaze-up-some, elevated..na u ~came-up-none
Beatin name-less-slums, I’m bout to make ur loss~wrecord raise-up-1..(21-14 to 21-15)
Releasing this Metaphorical-phase, resulting in a historical-blaze,
Gave him-some-change, just to know that his memorials-paid!
Im scorin-these-k’s (knockouts) watch cuz im ill-an-bizarre
Ur skillz-are-a~far, Ill send ya a stalker like the killer-in-ya-avatar,
~Sonned
aiight, nice verse man................................bump........... ..........lets get the votes needed...........................
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aight aight battle.......some nice wordplay in use.....but 'virs' verse won it fo me..........structure were clean an the flow were advanced to a point where double 0 cvnt reach...........but it were an aight battle......
but ma vote goes to*virtuoso
agiht uppin this....ish..........we need votes......
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I have to go with Double O Seven on this one structure goes to vir but hey everything else goes to Double O Seven
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virtuso had better punches but had no structure
do7 had structure
but punches win battles!!
virtuso wins
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punches both: Ur skillz-are-a~far, Ill send ya a stalker like the killer-in-ya-avatar//also behind, as the verbal battle, here gets stretched,
you like a mental midget, vrtually no I.Q whatsoever,
metas 007: im seasonin the storm, like i cook up the bad weather,
multies virt: I’m feedin-then-fleein, c I’l battle wit rusted-flows an still bust-ya-nose,
Ur face disgusts-the-hoes, an you’re the one to go an-trust-ya-foes~
personals 007: an insane, mental, state, is were you's gettin left, (prof)
flow both: both verses were consistant wasnt stretched and stayed dissing throughout
overall close battle but 007 took it by a hair virt your pretty tight kid no hate though
peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=102482
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ok well im not able 2 vote cuz i got less than 100 posts but
vote:virt
completly better puches and made alott more 2 me
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