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5-15 lines
no d/r, crews, etc etc etc
straightace first
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5-15 lines
no d/r, crews, etc etc etc
straightace first
the minimum amount of lines u can spit in a battle is 10 so change the rules............................................. .................................
Big headed you hardly thow punches u merely poke..
& when i punched this kid in the head, his 'water broke'..
Your sexuality is wrong as stated in the sacred lecture..
I cud make a gayporno usin the content of ur dreamcatcher..
You 'lost in time' like a time limit match..got u scriptin 'SOS'..
& kid, settin' back clocks is the only way u'll prevent a loss..
N i got this newbie confused with my simpliest mindframe..
Just like a dead hooker, cudn't handle this 'Head game'..
I'd personalize my punches but this mans character is dead..
Even more then a Front Lines, 3 week old battle thread..
Bother replyin' save urself the time,of takin hrs for a few lines
..Cause kid, shit dont get better just cuz u can 'up' 5 times..
12
Go..
look at the time can you tell? it took you forty minutes and those are the only rhymes you've got to sell.
i work under pressure so don't give me a lecture i went to U of hell.
rhymes galore always always in store, you'll buy me out use em up then beg my distributers for more and more.
your styles already written, these words to you just aren't fitten, so when you get real right over there i'll be sittin.
you have to use labels, to exaggerate fables, i'll knock your horse back in the stables, cause your ridin isn't paying the doles.
keep it up i'll spawn to satan and steal your soul, well maybe its gone cause your rhymes are bull.
you'll walk down my rhyming mart with an empty cart, drool going all of the floor, not looking so sure, so
i'm here to implore i am the reigning rhyme warrior, you're a lyrical whore so i'm here to show you the door.
Another one sided battle....
Ace caned this kid... Tight punches, personals etc... some witty lines.. dreamcatcher, up 5 times etc... all real nice makin a big impact.. Structure was on point making for a nice flow and connecting bars....
Munja's structure was kinda weak... seperate ya lines into short sharp bars for full effect.. multies were pretty good, altho was no-where near enough to match up to Ace's punches overall...
Outclassed in most aspects, therefore...
Vote - Straight Ace
Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99923
ha ha....i know who this ace character is now....
u can't be that ill an think i wasn't gonna get it....
ne ways....
ace destroyed this kid in every aspect....need i say more?
a totall merkin....
vote ace
Votes appreciated.
1th Uppin...
Up for poll votes..drop link & fav will be returned.
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Ace getd the ace and the score goes up 40 love!
Nah, for real though. Ace killed....
He wins in every category because obviously mic muncha can't spit.
I seen some similar drops to yours ace. I think you have another name as well.
Hot shit though. Good merking.
vote. Ace
Up...Uppinx2..
Uppin' for poll votes.........
Leave link & ill return the favour...
Second uppin..
Ace took this battle with better metas, personals, punches, structure and flow. MC watch ya structure and shit man. Your flow was aight, but the structure of ya rhyme kinda fucked with it. Also try and be a little more creative. peace 1
Third uppin'
Uppin for last & final vote..
Poll vote, leave a link to ur battle & ill return the favour..
One more vote..
completely one-sided. Ace merked him terribly. munja, elevate some more and ull get better. Ace, good job.
vote - Ace
return da favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102483 <-- (me vs -Technician-) [0-0] he hasnt spit yet, but when he does, VOTE!
Definition of a Merkin.... this battle...
Elevate munja, Elevate. More explanatory though: Your rhymes were reaching, felt like they were to stretched and had no real punchiness to them. Your structure was lackin and all... so I guess just up ypur game son... Good battle Ace.