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keeeezy fo sheeeeezy bitch
this fag cant get a grip.. he's grabbin wit sweaty hot palms
but truth is i'm like a fighter pilot.. the way that i drop BombZ
he's wack..
one move im & schoolin him.. i'd never give this fool the win
in 3 seconds you'll see this BombZ a dud.. once i 'pull the pin'
bitch you dont have ta rhyme.. you'll be too bruised to after mine
24-17..? better hurry up and spit! since you lose 'half the time'
ya path is blind, he's a man changed lady i think his brains crazy
he must be facin me,only thing we got in common's the same avy
ima hardhead i'll break ya punches, Center got a face like stone
now ima throw ya shit in the trash..cuz there's no place like home
Centah of attention? I rinse you of all means you mean nothin' in this dimension....
As BombZ I fit wit attire of sickness, you couldn't catch attention if you pulled the fire alarm acompanied wit a witness.....
Consist of low statistics wit those weapons of mine(same image), try to step on my style but still you don't set it off like Land MindZ(my crew)...
I plant mines like I plant newbs in the dirt, ya' flow would be much tougha if you would loose the skirt...
Cuz ya' pussy, and heres my prediction I know ya gonna regret it, how you lost this shit cuz each line was editted...
up#1 leave a link and i'll hit it up..
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up#2
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center takes it...bombz, wheres the structure? i dont know just wasnt feelin those one liners and shit. center you had a real nice vesre man....some good wordplay.....good rhymes and shit. i liked it. only thing i didnt like was the man changed lady thing...i dont know...sex jokes and shit....but over all nice drop man...
my vote : center
Center got him on the structure, I dont know why he made it so messy. Centers punches where hitting pretty nice. Bombz wasnt making as much impact as centers was. They were being put down, but not making full effect from my perspective. Good lines from center, there was an alright verse from bombz. But I know you can do better hommie...
Vote - Center Site
--> Return the favor and make an honest vote on the battle in my sig... That would be much appriciated...
yo that shit was kewl man...nice battle. but bombz didnt have no word structure but he still stung center...center got him better tho..but i cant vote yet untill i got 100 post...but my vote would be center..1
close battle...but my vote goes to Center basically on structure and wordplay. Better overall.....hit up my battle with SoulSplit plz
Structure-Center Sight
Flow-Tie
Punches-Center Sight
Stretched-BombZ
Personals-Neither
Overall Vote-Center Sight
Center Sight... Ya punches were ok...Good Structure
Need to work a bit on the multies...Personals too....
Overall You Did pretty good.. You got my vote
BombZ..... Ya Structure is fucked up homie...
Needs hella work to it... Punches were sorta weak
Overall Ya verse needs alot of help
No beef or anything... Just tryin to help you out
Vote-Center Sight
The Breakdown
Bombz
his verse was original nice wordplay n multies u came hard as fuck.
Center
his verse had tight wordplay, multies, n harder punches then Bombz
My vote-Center by a pube(lol)
i took mah time redo the favor
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