doc_knock vs 168

so 10-15 lines normal house rules

blind spit 30min time


check in and goodluck



peace outtie

aight do you spit first or do i?

and...checking in...have to delete the other one...

you up or me?

you are i'll give you 30min


then i get 30min


peace

outtie



goodluck

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you fuckin with the doc? let me give you a scrip/
ya gona need some medication when i bust up ya lip/
you aint got shit to touch the flow i bring/
people guard what i say, like da fellowship of the ring/
you got no name, just a number, yeah bitch step in line/
168, im fuckin 1, so ill just leave you behind/
you might as well cave before your chest collapses/
you betta pay ya dues to me like i was collectin taxes/
fuck ya numbered ass, ill beat you even goin first/
you all dried up, bitch i got lyrical thirst/
who you gona call when you out on yo ass/
cuz you tired to fuck with doc, and you know you wont last/
so let me give some advice before i close up my rhyme/
just shut the fuck up, you aint worth none of my time

Check it yo

Battle this doc is simple so ima make him leave in limbo
your gonna get fucked jus like your bitch ass bimbo

Check it your the doc but ima type you a new prescription
you should've read your lines dawg no fuckin information

ten lines 5 bars your gonna leave in lyrical wast bag
get lyricaly fucked make you feel like internet fag

I no your whit cuz you wear Du-Rags like a member of the KKK
168 will make you 1 as in 0-1 make sure that will stick

I jus join this RB game and might get my first win
rhymes like the one you carry should be the devils sin

peace

get somes in this

hooohoo, need some votes in this byatch

yo 168, how long you make the vote for



gotta get 1 double zizzy zero charactizers

Good battle...

168 came nice. Few played concepts there - kkk etc... but the flow was decent. You shouldn't seperate ya lines tho, makes it not connect so well.... overall an okay verse...
Doc came well... few good reference in there... numbers etc..
Nothin that stood out too much tho... few wack parts few good...
Overall I was feelin Doc's slightly more personally... therefore..

Vote - Doc_Knock

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really need some votes here...*cough*....#2...

vote vote vote!

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heres my vote........

you fuckin with the doc? let me give you a scrip/
ya gona need some medication when i bust up ya lip/
^ok a punch weak and simplistic but at least you threw it out there....
you aint got shit to touch the flow i bring/
people guard what i say, like da fellowship of the ring/
^NO!!!BOOO!!! tolkien was not a rapper leave his shit out of it...
you got no name, just a number, yeah bitch step in line/
168, im fuckin 1, so ill just leave you behind/
^ok you got a punch off on her name there it was a OK one too congrats....
you might as well cave before your chest collapses/
you betta pay ya dues to me like i was collectin taxes/
^meh played you prolly heard it before but whatever it a kinda punch...fuck ya numbered ass, ill beat you even goin first/
you all dried up, bitch i got lyrical thirst/
^simplistic but it works i call it an OK punch
who you gona call when you out on yo ass/
cuz you tired to fuck with doc, and you know you wont last/
^filler.....nothing worth mentionin
so let me give some advice before i close up my rhyme/
just shut the fuck up, you aint worth none of my time/
^weak ender...its a straight dis which came too weak
5/10.....

168
Battle this doc is simple so ima make him leave in limbo
your gonna get fucked jus like your bitch ass bimbo
^um not creative but its a punch....a weak punch....simile...
Check it your the doc but ima type you a new prescription
you should've read your lines dawg no fuckin information
^its a punch but the fact that it doesn't really ryhme kinda throws it off so i'll give you credit for another weak punch...
ten lines 5 bars your gonna leave in lyrical wast bag
get lyricaly fucked make you feel like internet fag
^BOOOO no do not use stupid fag shit like that ......nothing...
I no your whit cuz you wear Du-Rags like a member of the KKK
168 will make you 1 as in 0-1 make sure that will stick
^this doesn't ryhem at all....missed punch.....
I jus join this RB game and might get my first win
rhymes like the one you carry should be the devils sin
^thats an alright finisher usually you wanna hit harder than that..weak punch....

2/10

yo, i gots ta go wit da doc on this one...i was feelin his punches and personals...his flow and structure were slightly off but otha than that he was straight..
160 keep elevatin and you be aight...work on ur punches and personals.....

vote-doc

first of all ****not a hate vote**** But I say Doc took it, cause 168 had some problems with punches rhymin n stuff, plus some of it was weak, doc had the LOTR reference ha which was good, and the taxes thing which were his best, he won more so off a better verse overall good battle ----------------------------------------------------

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good battle:
flow:Doc
punches:Doc
vocab:Doc
structure:168

168 would've won cuz that line bout kkk was pretty good but some of ya stuff didn't rhyme not hating though it was a nice flow. Doc won but both did a pretty good job. 168 ya got punches jus need to elevate a little.

vote:Doc

Doc's
fuck ya numbered ass, ill beat you even goin first/
you all dried up, bitch i got lyrical thirst/
that line was killin tho i was feelin that
I hafta vote Doc on this one
168' jus didnt have enough hard punches in the verse, an the rhymes coulda used a lil work but over all it was still good verses fellas
Vote - Doc

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