Lil Phresh vs player_baller89

Aight, here are the rules:

10-14 lines or 5-7 bars
NO: d/r,crew,hate,love,unexplained,bullshit, or unofficial votes!

I'll spit in about 20-30 mins. check in and this battle will be under way. P'z

Fuck it, I'm gonna post my battle now and try to post by 12:00 PM EST...

I'm Divine-with-Scorn in Rhyming-Wars, Snap your Wrists so P_B's 'Timing's-Poor'/ -1
Twist your Spinal-Cord when I'll Punch your Teeth through your Cortex so your 'Mind-is-Torn'!/ -2
This is not a Passive-Contest but I'll Make you Grasp-the-Concept/ -3
Smashing your Face through the Monitor to Create a 'Graphic'-'Onset'!/ -4
Then Pounce-ThisYouth when I Cut your Joints-in-Two/ -5
and 'Stick my Fingers through your Eyes' to Give you my 'Point-of-View'!/ -6
I'll Sink-your-Clout you can Scream-and-Shout Until your Ink-Runs-Out/ -7
and Place your 'Brain Outside your Skull' so you can 'Think-this-Out'!/ -8
As I Split-Parts-With-War-Axes and Rip-Hearts-From-Thoraxes/ -9
This Bastard only Packs 'Raw Punches' when I Leave his 'Fists-Parked-in-Chloric-Acid'!/ -10
I'll Rearrange your Face like a Plastic-Surgeon/ -11
Using Sexual-Words-When I Violate this fag like a Catholic-Virgin!/ -12
Kid you Took-This-Fight-in-Haste now I'll leave you Shook-With-Life-Erased/ -13
Nobody's gonna 'Bite' your Verse because it Looks-Just-Like-it-Tastes!/ -14
Make you Appear on 'Ricki Lake' Lookin like a 'Battered-Wife'/ -15
The only Thing you'll 'Beat Me In' is a 'Race to the After-Life'!/ -16

you better send something back. this is prolly one of my best works of art

PS: I know its 16 lines, but just make it be 10-16. sorry. copy my lines if ya want.

wow im surprised, good verse yo, you got some skill. i'll just vote when he posts maybe by then i will hack 100 posts :)

thanx man. that was my best rap i've done. lol. i PMed this cat so maybe he will send something in. but if not, can a mod give me the win? p'z

yea if he no shows you can post in IR, and tell them you problem, if he does happen to no show you just wasted a good verse and would probably get the win.. PM me if you dont understand anything i can help you in getting settled in..

ooops in my previous post i said "hack 100 posts" its supposed to say "have 100 post" just made a mistake thats all

Peace (sorry for this freepost)

Yo, I look up or your age and history
Your record is 0-0 lookin for your fist victory
I'm not goin to let you win right now and today
I'll take your comb, tampons and bottles of hairsray
Man you cant hind the truth, you better not lie
Just because guy doesnt mean your G-A-Y
Listen to N-sync and go bye bye bye cause your just a little bitch that shouldnt even try
Wipe away your fears and when you go home dont run off in tears
Try to follow this, I'll pay for your ticket back to Indy-Polis
Man stay focus or you cant do that either
Does your flow suck this bad or do you just have fever

aight. nice flow. nice flow. lets get this uppin for votes. uppin...................................

Lil Phres took this shit.....no doubt in my mind

Punches - LP
Wordplay - LP
Flow- LP
Structure - LP (could use some work tho)
Creaticity - LP

Vote - LP

whats up with the hairspray line PB?? Do you really suck that bad?

hey hey hey, if you wanna diss him, do it in a battle, but thanx for the vote, ill repay u when i get 100 posts. 1-0 still uppin.

come on guys i need some votes to end this. i have some other battles that i need to start. and once, dont DQ me for having too many battles. i wasnt aware of this rule.

u shuda been
jk jk
good shit
L P
ya names gay
an u cant spell
but ya verse is tite..feelin it
u aint half bad for a newb...

u rap on other sites...

i use to..

breakdown..
lp had better flow an punches plus mulites..that otehr kid sucked

the only other site im on is a site that verstyle made up and it just started like 4-5 days ago or something. and i have yet to rap on it.

come on people, vote and get this battle over with. please vote.............................................. .

lil cleaned up in this battle

Punches - Lil
Wordplay - Lil
Flow- Lil
Structure - Lil
Creativity - Lil

Vote - Lil

player keep elevatin


seein as i took ma time 2 vote on dis cud u repay the favour by hittin up ma battle

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogressthnx man

mc aines

u didnt poll. make sure u poll ur vote. and as soon as i reach 100 posts, ill be sure to vote for you back, that is, if you won or not. hehe