Corporal vs Lil Phresh

Deadline 25 minutes
10-12 Bars
5 - votes to win
3 - 0 TKO
No feeding

Vote fairly an check in Phresh

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Check this dude..like i Fucked ya Scripts ya Text is Screwed
cos foreal ´Lil´ the only thing people like ´Fresh´ is Food
you jes a noob..My Posts low but ´C´ straight Roast Foes
An Phresh all ya Hits are ´Cheap´ an im not talkin low blows
Your a Homo..don´t stand a chance so ´sittings´ better
cos kid we know your futures gloomy like ´british´ weather
Even my set-ups hit-ya way above ya..you can´t reach me
like I kid thats stronger than his father..you can´t beat C
Aint peeped a decent rap of yours..but check who you facing
cos your skill jus ´aint there´ like your profile location

..in less than 5 since you complaining an limits comin up..oNe..

man i dont even have to try for this shit/
ill make ya go back to your mamas tit/
i slaughter you worse than you think/
ill make all yo future ideas shrink/
i could beat you in 11 lines but this next is 6/
you need to hire a mechanic, ur lines need fix(ed)/
im just getting started on my dissin rap/
i bet you feel like your shit is crap/
man im about to close this rap with a few more/
my rep in this area is about to soar/
dog, i could beat you in a battle to 5 if i gave you 6 point lead/

finally, i got it up and it kinda sucks but i was in a hurry. please vote. //////////////////////////////////////////////

if i could vote i'd vote corporal
not hatin' but i think it was just better
and i really dont see were the last line of phresh's verse rymed at??
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i think that Lil P took this is a good battle both had strong punches, structure, N E ways i cant vote quite yet!
Vote: lil P
Bottom Line: good battle both

damnit. everytime i get a vote, it dont count. lol. well try to get 100 posts and vote. we need votes here

ok..mods in here please..

1.CLEAN IT UP

an

2.Check that blatant dickryde vote...you nee dto properly explain votes..a couple quotations WHY you think Phresh took it....

I hate uppin but can we get atleast 1 vote on this before it is slept on.I can´t vote on any1s battle because of the rule about not 100 posts but because of it i am not receiving any votes.and am being slept on.are we supposed to go on a freeposting frenzy so we can vote an get votes in return?

Freeposting has been deleted. Voters didn't poll so there's no point in checking into it. Please stop freeposting in here. Don't post unless you're uppin or voting. Read new voting rule before voting as well.