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Deadline Midnight PST 11/16/11
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10-12 lines
Deadline Midnight PST 11/16/11
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Da Beast From The East, start Bringin' Forth The Enemies
it's a miracle if you live thru my lyrics torturin' ya endlessly
if you wanna talk cheap, you leave under a cloth sheet
Around now I can easily catch "miracle on thirty-fourth street"
since you wanna start beef, I can slaughter it and flames shit
like the NBA lockout I don't bother with the games bitch
Ima general, you should never question a soldier
you'll need more than a miracle to ressurect from a coma
I stay spitin sickly with witty rants and quotes
you got less chances of winning than Indiana Colts
Will drop links later
shit i feel asleep last night.
ill write in a lil
this key'll merk this 26 year old lame...your to basic
victory is a sweet thing..to bad u'll never taste it
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mir will crush this lame fuck....i can guarantee you'll drop dude
i aint talking bout eating habbits of police, when i say ill SWAT chew
i got this fag stressin. he'll be bald if it continues at this rate
cuz im leaving him pulling out more hair then rapunzel boyfriend gaining weight
talking that shit will dig you a grave, no one will see this dude abuse me
my swift punches will burry this fagget faster then a fruit smootie
i smash bones n snap necks... take your spine n bend it
putting BF in more danger then a rocky friendship
don't 4get ur links homie
..ill have mine after work tonight
BFTE
Da Beast From The East, start Bringin' Forth The Enemies
it's a miracle if you live thru my lyrics torturin' ya endlessly
didnt feel much of a punch here
if you wanna talk cheap, you leave under a cloth sheet
Around now I can easily catch "miracle on thirty-fourth street"
ok not bad think i seen this np concept b4 but overall good punch
since you wanna start beef, I can slaughter it and flames shit
like the NBA lockout I don't bother with the games bitch
nba lockout punches played no hate man
Ima general, you should never question a soldier
you'll need more than a miracle to ressurect from a coma
ok direct punch nice
I stay spitin sickly with witty rants and quotes
you got less chances of winning than Indiana Colts
played concept again sorry ddue no hate
Miracle
this key'll merk this 26 year old lame...your to basic
victory is a sweet thing..to bad u'll never taste it
ok noit hardhitting but slight hit
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mir will crush this lame fuck....i can guarantee you'll drop dude
i aint talking bout eating habbits of police, when i say ill SWAT chew
ok lol nice w/p good concept
i got this fag stressin. he'll be bald if it continues at this rate
cuz im leaving him pulling out more hair then rapunzel boyfriend gaining weight
lmao good concept
talking that shit will dig you a grave, no one will see this dude abuse me
my swift punches will burry this fagget faster then a fruit smootie
nah wasnt feeling this w/p kinda forced
i smash bones n snap necks... take your spine n bend it
putting BF in more danger then a rocky friendship
ok nice np
Well battle pretty onesided here. Props to BF he had a couple concepts that hit but Miracle showed a good sign of creativity when it came to wp np and just overall good choice of his concepts.
V/Miracle
links coming soon
i smash bones n snap necks... take your spine n bend it
putting BF in more danger then a rocky friendship
-miracle
I personally think that was one of your better lines in this one
Ima general, you should never question a soldier
you'll need more than a miracle to ressurect from a coma
BFTE
I liked this one from you BFTE..
Both verses seemed kinda rushed but overall it was a good battle from both emcees... cant vote so it is what it is
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...926/index.html
voted on the champ match which is worth 2links
BTFE had better statements with some good quotables Miracle had a few good lines to miracle on 24th street inpaticular but id have to say v BFTE decent battle
Well this was a close one but I think BTFE had the edge on this one. And miracle don't think I'm comin on some biased shit cuz we're battlin, this is just how I see it.
Vote goes to: BTFE
Reasons:
-BTFE you had a nice rhyme-scheme, I like how your verse flows. The punches were on point, the wording was good, overall a good verse. The lines that won it for you were:
"since you wanna start beef, I can slaughter it and flames shit
like the NBA lockout I don't bother with the games bitch
Ima general, you should never question a soldier
you'll need more than a miracle to ressurect from a coma"
-Miracle your verse was just slightly weaker. I felt the two weak punches towards the end with rapunzel, (badly worded, failed to rhyme correct) and the smoothie line (I don't see a real punch here) lost it for you. Other than that good wordplay, stay up
lol up
Ima general, you should never question a soldier
you'll need more than a miracle to ressurect from a coma
vs
this key'll merk this 26 year old lame...your to basic
victory is a sweet thing..to bad u'll never taste it
.
.
mir will crush this lame fuck....i can guarantee you'll drop dude
i aint talking bout eating habbits of police, when i say ill SWAT chew
i got this fag stressin. he'll be bald if it continues at this rate
cuz im leaving him pulling out more hair then rapunzel boyfriend gaining weight
well this was a 1sided n weak battle.. imo miracle took it easily with more direct and consistent punchs but i felt your flow fell off abit in some bars... bfte u came with statements or misses.. no hate homies keep practicing
v/mir no hate hums