FL Champ: Punch Vs. Verbal Hologram (Punch wins)

Front Lines Championship


In the blue corner standing at 76-4 weighting around TOP RANKED! in FL he is the reigning UNDEFEATED FL champion Bar "The Hotness" Cotic.

In the red corner we have a very promising talent rise. standing at 16-2 weighting around 3rd RANKED weighting around heavyweight...the challenger Verbal "The Crucifier" Hologram.

Ok i want you guys to show up swinging and drop bombs. i want a clean fight no low blows and watch the back of the head. you know the rest now touch gloves and lets get it on!...


10 lines minimum
20 lines maximum
No recycling/biting
usual league battle rules apply or there will be a deduction of votes
Check ins due by Wednesday
Verses due by Friday
Both are due by midnight Pacific
this title will be defended once every two weeks


Good luck to you both

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Originally Posted by Mr.Write

[CENTER]In the blue corner standing at 76-4 weighting around TOP RANKED! in FL he is the reigning UNDEFEATED FL champion Bar "The Hotness" Cotic.

In the red corner we have a very promising talent rise. standing at 16-2 weighting around 4th RANKED weighting around heavyweight...the challenger Verbal "The Crucifier" Hologram.

Ok i want you guys to show up swinging and drop bombs. i want a clean fight no low blows and watch the back of the head. you know the rest now shake hands and lets get it on!...[/B]

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LMAO, priceless.. but I'm not shakin hands.. I'm touchin gloves, lol..
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...n/untitled.png
Oh n Verbal, you said somethin about makin this short if you did get a shot, n I agree, I have LLL n a battle on another site too, so let's make this 10, 12, pick one n good luck....

LMAO.....Nice one Mr Write.

But is the top heavyweight vs the 3rd ranked heavyweight

anyway 10-12 is good with me, i would prefer 10 cause I haven't even starting writing yet, just let me know Bar-but I think you've already said 12.

I guess the FAM's already had N abortion, now I'm Barstardizing their only son
Even if you collabed with Pharell and Kanye......you still wouldn't be number 1
Quit the forced wordplay, Its bad to watch.... like a constipated man taking a shit
the Commandments so dry with talent at the moment, that they got no saliva to spit (inactive)
Its gonna be a Spittacular fall from grace, when u FAIL in LLL's first weak
u must be dropping your verses in liquid nitrogen, the way they keep loosing heat
Elevate, and you'll stop getting fines, for staying in the same spot.....idle
get off the computer dude, u already got more (pre) written verses then the bible
You just fucked 10 lines in a row, so don't even worry about an acting career
the outcome is slanted to one side so much, I thought this war took place in Korea.

Shit, I'm up to bat now n it shouldn't take more than two blows,
cuz when the Timber-lands.... it'll knock you out those boots bro..
I'm too dope, you're too old, we all know you have a damn cunt,
n you'd suck your own dick like Marilyn.... if you were a Man-son..
Faggot, why'd you lie about bein good? what were you pullin kid?
like how the fuck can you be Holo.... when you're really full of shit?!
Bitch, do I think you should go audio? maybe in a mainly whack world,
cuz when it comes to bein Verbal.... you sound like an angry black girl..
Dude, the truth is I feel like an abusive dad n you're my accident,
ya I took the belt off.... n had lots of fun whipping your ass with it..
:spank:

gotta break this down

Barcotic

Shit, I'm up to bat now n it shouldn't take more than two blows,
cuz when the Timber-lands.... it'll knock you out those boots bro..
..lol creative wordplay to start very decent 3.2/5 opener..

I'm too dope, you're too old, we all know you have a damn cunt,
n you'd suck your own dick like Marilyn.... if you were a Man-son..
..funny, liked tha wordplay once again..

Faggot, why'd you lie about bein good? what were you pullin kid?
like how the fuck can you be Holo.... when you're really full of shit?!
..funny and good nameplay..

Bitch, do I think you should go audio? maybe in a mainly whack world,
cuz when it comes to bein Verbal.... you sound like an angry black girl..
..lol nice punch and personal..

Dude, the truth is I feel like an abusive dad n you're my accident,
ya I took the belt off.... n had lots of fun whipping your ass with it..
..lol great punch/meta to end your verse 3/5..


Verbal Hologram

I guess the FAM's already had N abortion, now I'm Barstardizing their only son
Even if you collabed with Pharell and Kanye......you still wouldn't be number 1
..not bad havent seen this concept at tha end yet so decent 2/5 opener..

Quit the forced wordplay, Its bad to watch.... like a constipated man taking a shit
the Commandments so dry with talent at the moment, that they got no saliva to spit
..ok but constipated lines are played, but liked tha 2nd line it made up for it..


Its gonna be a Spittacular fall from grace, when u FAIL in LLL's first weak
u must be dropping your verses in liquid nitrogen, the way they keep loosing heat
..lol decent, both lines was on point on this bar man..

Elevate, and you'll stop getting fines, for staying in the same spot.....idle
get off the computer dude, u already got more (pre) written verses then the bible
..lol ok personal..

You just fucked 10 lines in a row, so don't even worry about an acting career
the outcome is slanted to one side so much, I thought this war took place in Korea.
..decent way to finish but tha punch could've been way harder 2/5..


OPENER/ENDER- BAR

CREATIVE- BAR

PUNCHES- BAR

FLOW- BAR

PERSONALS- VH

MULTIES- BAR

WORD/NAMEPLAY- BAR

METAS- BAR, verbal had some but bar's edged it

OVERALL VOTE- Barcotic really man in my opion this was really one-sided for a HW title match, bar just kept his verse constant with non-stop punches and he dissed verbal way more then verb did to him, bar also had better flow and his multie scheme was on point not that forced, verbal you had personals all you needed was more harsh punches and some witty word/nameplay that would've mos def. helped..

Holo: ... I don't what else to tell you other than stop forcing wordplays, and start using direct punches. I didn't like any of your bars.

Vs.

barcotic, you dropped a filler verse.. nothing real nice

i did like the name flip tho

Faggot, why'd you lie about bein good? what were you pullin kid?
like how the fuck can you be Holo.... when you're really full of shit?!

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over all, this isn't the sort of battle i'd be proud to say is a heavy weight shot.
if you, barcotic, have the chance to defend ur title.. i say, go all out every time.. instead of just doing the bare mininum.

oh.. vote barcotic.. confidentaly

I guess the FAM's already had N abortion, now I'm Barstardizing their only son
Even if you collabed with Pharell and Kanye......you still wouldn't be number 1
whack
Quit the forced wordplay, Its bad to watch.... like a constipated man taking a shit
the Commandments so dry with talent at the moment, that they got no saliva to spit
wheres the punch?
Its gonna be a Spittacular fall from grace, when u FAIL in LLL's first weak
u must be dropping your verses in liquid nitrogen, the way they keep loosing heat
too simple
Elevate, and you'll stop getting fines, for staying in the same spot.....idle
get off the computer dude, u already got more (pre) written verses then the bible
ollllllllddddddddd concept
You just fucked 10 lines in a row, so don't even worry about an acting career
the outcome is slanted to one side so much, I thought this war took place in Korea.
eh, poor wording

Shit, I'm up to bat now n it shouldn't take more than two blows,
cuz when the Timber-lands.... it'll knock you out those boots bro..
played
I'm too dope, you're too old, we all know you have a damn cunt,
n you'd suck your own dick like Marilyn.... if you were a Man-son..
aint seen this before, cool idea, but execution/wordin lacked
Faggot, why'd you lie about bein good? what were you pullin kid?
like how the fuck can you be Holo.... when you're really full of shit?!
dont like broken nameplay, but punch is nice
Bitch, do I think you should go audio? maybe in a mainly whack world,
cuz when it comes to bein Verbal.... you sound like an angry black girl..
ehhhh
Dude, the truth is I feel like an abusive dad n you're my accident,
ya I took the belt off.... n had lots of fun whipping your ass with it..
titlebelt / angry dad shit is mad old

was this really a hw battle? hologram is fuckin whack, who even gave him a title shot? smh
barcotic took this easy.

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Originally Posted by Duty

was this really a hw battle? hologram is fuckin whack, who even gave him a title shot? smh
barcotic took this easy.[/B]

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It's points based.. like when we had the battle score.. only top battle score = best

basically.. papers, syco, bosco, c-15, and I.. would be running this.. lol

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Originally Posted by Reflex.

It's points based.. like when we had the battle score.. only top battle score = best

basically.. papers, syco, bosco, c-15, and I.. would be running this.. lol

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Yeah right.. my record on RB was 0-0 on November 1st (08).. now it's 76-4.. so including this battle n my other one up vs Romeo Capone, I've battled 82 times in the last 3 months.. I have 206 points on the rankings list, but 106 of them are in brackets cuz 100 is the limit, lmao....

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I guess the FAM's already had N abortion, now I'm Barstardizing their only son
Even if you collabed with Pharell and Kanye......you still wouldn't be number 1
this was ok man, but ive seen it used

Quit the forced wordplay, Its bad to watch.... like a constipated man taking a shit
the Commandments so dry with talent at the moment, that they got no saliva to spit (inactive)
another used meta

Its gonna be a Spittacular fall from grace, when u FAIL in LLL's first weak
u must be dropping your verses in liquid nitrogen, the way they keep loosing heat
this was ok, prolly the best line here

Elevate, and you'll stop getting fines, for staying in the same spot.....idle
get off the computer dude, u already got more (pre) written verses then the bible
lmao man, ur ranked 1?

You just fucked 10 lines in a row, so don't even worry about an acting career
the outcome is slanted to one side so much, I thought this war took place in Korea.
finisher was garbage, i expect a contender to come much harder





Shit, I'm up to bat now n it shouldn't take more than two blows,
cuz when the Timber-lands.... it'll knock you out those boots bro..
this is nice, heard it said similiar tho

I'm too dope, you're too old, we all know you have a damn cunt,
n you'd suck your own dick like Marilyn.... if you were a Man-son..
lmao i get it. this is raw

Faggot, why'd you lie about bein good? what were you pullin kid?
like how the fuck can you be Holo.... when you're really full of shit?!
lol thats cool

Bitch, do I think you should go audio? maybe in a mainly whack world,
cuz when it comes to bein Verbal.... you sound like an angry black girl..
hmmm oh wait i get it lol, be careful u might get banned lmao

Dude, the truth is I feel like an abusive dad n you're my accident,
ya I took the belt off.... n had lots of fun whipping your ass with it..
lmao nice closer man



vote:barcotic

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Originally Posted by Barcotic

Yeah right.. my record on RB was 0-0 on November 1st (08).. now it's 76-4.. so including this battle n my other one up vs Romeo Capone, I've battled 82 times in the last 3 months.. I have 206 points on the rankings list, but 106 of them are in brackets cuz 100 is the limit, lmao....

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that's called rape. i'll be reporting this.

Lol....

I'm too dope, you're too old, we all know you have a damn cunt,
n you'd suck your own dick like Marilyn.... if you were a Man-son..
Faggot, why'd you lie about bein good? what were you pullin kid?
like how the fuck can you be Holo.... when you're really full of shit?!

v.s

Nothin


gotta go wit bar here...verse was aiight but consistant....verb had absolutly nothin...gotta come harder than this in champ match kid