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He spits first
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10 lines
House rules
No noob votes
He spits first
Due whenever
Check it nigga
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a suppressing exertion of an armada of shots pin pointed toward your dome
with self mutilation "i am what i eat" splitting the marrow from your bones
a clean sweep of accurate bristles ill leave you dusted with no sound or ruckus
and precede with no hesitation as i spit on you then broom fuck your carcass
envision flies take wind down your throat so if it is more then you can stomach
it's cause i told you to go suck the seven's dick....which you replied "iv done it"
ill terrorize your feeble frame and with the chainsaw i will maul at your face
slash your boyfriends appendage off and watch you lick your lips at it's taste
ill snap your vertebrae of and use the cord to bind my note folder
and then cut both of your pectorals of and use them as beer holder's
this fag's only concerned with suckin dick, no time for spittin dope
vamps a horr-or slut? he fucks enough men to be considered both
u couldn't be half the head that I am, I'm swinging box cutters DIE
v came to the match with half his face cause I ate the other side (avatar)
he wants to be tight but can't walk in my boots, this kid is shook
so I'll slice some meat off his calf and his toes so they fit his foot
faggot, I'll kick back and relax after I take ur dome off and slam it
use the brain to connect ur scalp between trees as a hammick
I'll rip ur guts out, testicals n bowels gettin minced with machetes
proceed to feed em his own flesh cause hes convinced it spaghetti
Votes plz? I'll RTF.
ill terrorize your feeble frame and with the chainsaw i will maul at your face
slash your boyfriends appendage off and watch you lick your lips at it's taste
ill snap your vertebrae of and use the cord to bind my note folder
and then cut both of your pectorals of and use them as beer holder's
vs
this fag's only concerned with suckin dick, no time for spittin dope
vamps a horr-or slut? he fucks enough men to be considered both
u couldn't be half the head that I am, I'm swinging box cutters DIE
v came to the match with half his face cause I ate the other side (avatar)
he wants to be tight but can't walk in my boots, this kid is shook
so I'll slice some meat off his calf and his toes so they fit his foot
faggot, I'll kick back and relax after I take ur dome off and slam it
use the brain to connect ur scalp between trees as a hammick
I'll rip ur guts out, testicals n bowels gettin minced with machetes
proceed to feed em his own flesh cause hes convinced it spaghetti
^^^^^^^^^^LMFAO this whole verse had me rolling, shit was dope... the spaghetti line absolutly sick! sorry vamp but u got str8 owned my nigga.. damn for real its not like vamp didnt have a good verse its just all camos verses landed way harder...
v- camo... good battle and sick verses
vote camo
vampz came decent here but lacked the creativity and
reader grabbing attention that camo brought to the match
his lines where witty and well worded, plus he came consistantly
hard overall without much error....vampz..you had decent concepts
but some of your bars where too stretched word wise because
they may not have been if they where worded better to better
suit the fl0w you had...decent battle...stay up^
Yeah this win belongs to Camo.
Vamps -
a suppressing exertion of an armada of shots pin pointed toward your dome
with self mutilation "i am what i eat" splitting the marrow from your bones
-meh. ok
a clean sweep of accurate bristles ill leave you dusted with no sound or ruckus
and precede with no hesitation as i spit on you then broom fuck your carcass
-quite comical
envision flies take wind down your throat so if it is more then you can stomach
it's cause i told you to go suck the seven's dick....which you replied "iv done it"
-nah didn't like
ill terrorize your feeble frame and with the chainsaw i will maul at your face
slash your boyfriends appendage off and watch you lick your lips at it's taste
-meh
ill snap your vertebrae of and use the cord to bind my note folder
and then cut both of your pectorals of and use them as beer holder's
-made me smile
Camo -
this fag's only concerned with suckin dick, no time for spittin dope
vamps a horr-or slut? he fucks enough men to be considered both
-nice
u couldn't be half the head that I am, I'm swinging box cutters DIE
v came to the match with half his face cause I ate the other side (avatar)
-okay
he wants to be tight but can't walk in my boots, this kid is shook
so I'll slice some meat off his calf and his toes so they fit his foot
-Meh
faggot, I'll kick back and relax after I take ur dome off and slam it
use the brain to connect ur scalp between trees as a hammick
-ok
I'll rip ur guts out, testicals n bowels gettin minced with machetes
proceed to feed em his own flesh cause hes convinced it spaghetti
-funny but you know it's whack lol
Vamps Comments - Well... this seems to be your own game, with the horrorcore shit but i gotta say, you just got massacred. You need to add more punches. Your making lots of simple statements that rhyme and although your concepts are obviously quite good, you didn't use them creatively or effectively enough to win this particular battle.
Camo - Ok.. i laughed at it. It was good. Better punches and better fl0w. And thats why you won.
V/ CaMoFLaWge
forgot to add link... dont have one to hand, but rtf my battle wit "xEvilDx"
Up, I'll RTF.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...661/index.html
a suppressing exertion of an armada of shots pin pointed toward your dome
with self mutilation "i am what i eat" splitting the marrow from your bones
-koo
a clean sweep of accurate bristles ill leave you dusted with no sound or ruckus
and precede with no hesitation as i spit on you then broom fuck your carcass
-lol ight
envision flies take wind down your throat so if it is more then you can stomach
it's cause i told you to go suck the seven's dick....which you replied "iv done it"
-what does 777 have to do with this? And no
ill terrorize your feeble frame and with the chainsaw i will maul at your face
slash your boyfriends appendage off and watch you lick your lips at it's taste
-not feelin it
ill snap your vertebrae of and use the cord to bind my note folder
and then cut both of your pectorals of and use them as beer holder's
-nah
$$VS$$
CaMo
this fag's only concerned with suckin dick, no time for spittin dope
vamps a horr-or slut? he fucks enough men to be considered both
-nice haha
u couldn't be half the head that I am, I'm swinging box cutters DIE
v came to the match with half his face cause I ate the other side (avatar)
-nice 1
he wants to be tight but can't walk in my boots, this kid is shook
so I'll slice some meat off his calf and his toes so they fit his foot
-not feelin it
faggot, I'll kick back and relax after I take ur dome off and slam it
use the brain to connect ur scalp between trees as a hammick
-nice
I'll rip ur guts out, testicals n bowels gettin minced with machetes
proceed to feed em his own flesh cause hes convinced it spaghetti
-oK closer
wow good battle guys but I have to give this one to CaMo.. vampz, u had some sick stuff but camo came better with the "nastiness" if u wanna call it, threw a personal or 2, both yall raw at this shit but camo had an edge over ya vampz ight.. g/L in later battles and all dat.. Peace
my bad yall it just closed :( hit this up.. if you were planing on it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...631/index.html
I thought this was a pretty one sided match....there was potential in vampz verse but Camo pretty much beat him in every aspect of the battle....better structure, punches, etc. so vote Camo
CaMoFLaWGe™
this fag's only concerned with suckin dick, no time for spittin dope
vamps a horr-or slut? he fucks enough men to be considered both
..lol this isn't horrorcore though..
u couldn't be half the head that I am, I'm swinging box cutters DIE
v came to the match with half his face cause I ate the other side (avatar)
..Ok decent sick..
he wants to be tight but can't walk in my boots, this kid is shook
so I'll slice some meat off his calf and his toes so they fit his foot
..Now this getting more sicker..
faggot, I'll kick back and relax after I take ur dome off and slam it
use the brain to connect ur scalp between trees as a hammick
..Solid sick line..
I'll rip ur guts out, testicals n bowels gettin minced with machetes
proceed to feed em his own flesh cause hes convinced it spaghetti
..sick-ish closer..
Vamps
a suppressing exertion of an armada of shots pin pointed toward your dome
with self mutilation "i am what i eat" splitting the marrow from your bones
..Sick-ish opener..
a clean sweep of accurate bristles ill leave you dusted with no sound or ruckus
and precede with no hesitation as i spit on you then broom fuck your carcass
..sick but bit funny lol..
envision flies take wind down your throat so if it is more then you can stomach
it's cause i told you to go suck the seven's dick....which you replied "iv done it"
..damn I was feeling the first line more, 2nd just was forced bro'..
ill terrorize your feeble frame and with the chainsaw i will maul at your face
slash your boyfriends appendage off and watch you lick your lips at it's taste
..kinda of a played sick concept, lick/lips/taste seen it to many times..
ill snap your vertebrae of and use the cord to bind my note folder
and then cut both of your pectorals of and use them as beer holder's
...Dope, Sick closer..
Vote- Camo damn just edging it out really, I felt camo's wording helped a lot as well, cause this is a Horrorcore battle so I'm looking for the most sick lines and horror theme, I felt horror theme Vampz edged it out, and Camo that opener almost was a bummer bro', it was more of a comic bar, but it was a good bar though. now Sick lines I gave the edge to Camo more.