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Greatness
In this world I feel like there's no room for me
With everybody it's the same fucking story
Poor me my life's shit well when ya don't strive for greatness
What the fuck do you expect to get
Stop complaining about the life that you created
Maybe that why you constantly getting faded
You hate what you've become
Well I'm Tryna write my next chapter
When I look back on my past its all laughter
Cuz the shit I've done really don't matter
Today's a new start and something's changed in my heart
Tired of the game I don't wanna be apart
I'm dreaming but livin a nightmare
I'm leaving this shit call me fake I don't care
I'm letting go and moving on to something greater
Saying goodbye to the game no cya later
I'm headed for greatness and I know most of you will hate this
Soon ya gonna hear me on every playlist
I'm tired of this shit I'm gonna break the mold
And make my life a story to be told
I got that motivation like Rowland
Driving through life like this motherfuckers stolen
Suns setting and I'm rolling
Dealt my hand I'm all in never folding
I'm an all or nothing kinda dude
I'm real you can tell by my attitude
Just Tryna do what I can to succeed
I got goals I'm Tryna to acheive
But I got demons that like to deceive
Drink that shit that leaves bruises on my arms
Thought Id wake up from the nightmare but there's no alarms
So I'm running like in being chased by the five o
Where ill end up fuck I don't know
But anythings better than this
I'd start all over if I had one wish
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Re: Greatness
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Re: Greatness
Rhymes were really simple: mold/told, dude/attitude, heart/apart. I also couldn't really get the flow down but it might just not come through well through text. Keep writing man, try to use more multi word/syllable rhymes. Like instead of blue and shoe try something like ill choke you with my shoelace til you blue in the face (not the best example but you see where I'm coming from!)
