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I'm not about to record when I say i'm testing Mic
When i say you're skills suck i'm talking bout ur sex life
And the shit you write because it's brutal to read
I'll screw you up and burn you like i do with weed
I ain't choppin down trees when I grab the axe out of shed
I'm just gonna use it to seriously destroy ya head
Quick freestyle to fuck this pussy ass snitch up
This fag's rhymes are bad like this kid's luck
You suck and your lines aren't anything to brag about
This kid is a dick...and that's what's always in this fag's mouth
I'm ready to rip you apart like i was eating a rack of ribs
You say you're dope...but that just adds to your pack of fibs
I'll smack ya kids, then i'll bomb ya crib with some dynamite
I'm a legend & you're just a plain elementary child when u type
I'm dying to fight & i'll write tight, but you can't do either
Take a breather, i'll leave ya girl broken in like a sneaker
You got no cool features, plus you're all yellowed out and shit
And That's the only way Versatile can stand out you bitch
Now im about to flip like a pancake, you're a damn fake
I'll smoke you so fucking much you thought i was tryin to clam bake
done...
yo goodluck bro...ill have links later im going to see my fam for thanks giving
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...278/index.html
I'm not about to record when I say i'm testing Mic
When i say you're skills suck i'm talking bout ur sex life
no
And the shit you write because it's brutal to read
I'll screw you up and burn you like i do with weed
no
I ain't choppin down trees when I grab the axe out of shed
I'm just gonna use it to seriously destroy ya head
no
Quick freestyle to fuck this pussy ass snitch up
This fag's rhymes are bad like this kid's luck
no
You suck and your lines aren't anything to brag about
This kid is a dick...and that's what's always in this fag's mouth
eh, played
vs
I'm ready to rip you apart like i was eating a rack of ribs
You say you're dope...but that just adds to your pack of fibs
eh
I'll smack ya kids, then i'll bomb ya crib with some dynamite
I'm a legend & you're just a plain elementary child when u type
weak
I'm dying to fight & i'll write tight, but you can't do either
Take a breather, i'll leave ya girl broken in like a sneaker
eh ok
You got no cool features, plus you're all yellowed out and shit
And That's the only way Versatile can stand out you bitch
ok
Now im about to flip like a pancake, you're a damn fake
I'll smoke you so fucking much you thought i was tryin to clam bake
nah
vote mic.. more polished. neither was dope.
Quick freestyle to fuck this pussy ass snitch up
This fag's rhymes are bad like this kid's luck
-best line from versatile.. your verse could have been better.. work on your punches cause you lacked any creative ones.. just being real
You got no cool features, plus you're all yellowed out and shit
And That's the only way Versatile can stand out you bitch
- this was a top line from mic... your verse lacked also but you had better of the punches in this battle 1-0..
vote- Mic
versatile
I'm not about to record when I say i'm testing Mic
When i say you're skills suck i'm talking bout ur sex life
nah
And the shit you write because it's brutal to read
I'll screw you up and burn you like i do with weed
nah too basic
I ain't choppin down trees when I grab the axe out of shed
I'm just gonna use it to seriously destroy ya head
ok more direct hit a bit
Quick freestyle to fuck this pussy ass snitch up
This fag's rhymes are bad like this kid's luck
nah
You suck and your lines aren't anything to brag about
This kid is a dick...and that's what's always in this fag's mouth
nah too basic
Mic
I'm ready to rip you apart like i was eating a rack of ribs
You say you're dope...but that just adds to your pack of fibs
good multis this punch was ok
I'll smack ya kids, then i'll bomb ya crib with some dynamite
I'm a legend & you're just a plain elementary child when u type
nah wasnt strong with the setup shoulda came off with stronger finisher
I'm dying to fight & i'll write tight, but you can't do either
Take a breather, i'll leave ya girl broken in like a sneaker
ok punch again nice mutli
You got no cool features, plus you're all yellowed out and shit
And That's the only way Versatile can stand out you bitch
nice better bar here
Now im about to flip like a pancake, you're a damn fake
I'll smoke you so fucking much you thought i was tryin to clam bake
nah
V/mic thought he had some better hits improvement from last time though definitely elevating just gotta make them hit harder.
nothing
vs.
I'm dying to fight & i'll write tight, but you can't do either
Take a breather, i'll leave ya girl broken in like a sneaker
You got no cool features, plus you're all yellowed out and shit
And That's the only way Versatile can stand out you bitch
i think mic. got this with the 2 quotables i got for him. Versatile, elevate my nigga, ur verse wasnt aweful but ur punches didn't land, they came off either weak or statementish my dogg. no hate to either, keep elevatin my niggas.
v - mic.
RTF: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...296/index.html
You suck and your lines aren't anything to brag about
This kid is a dick...and that's what's always in this fag's mouth
-ur best attempt. this wasnt to bad
vs
You got no cool features, plus you're all yellowed out and shit
And That's the only way Versatile can stand out you bitch
-this wasnt to bad..iight hit
v/mic thought his punch was better n he had better attempts thruout his verse
nothing much here. concepts were played on both sites. none of you had real good punches but mic somehow came a slight bit harder so I got him on this one too.
Vote: Mic
mic wins