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PLAYOFFS
Round 1
CHECK INS DUE WEDNESDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
PUNCHES DUE FRIDAY 11:59PM EASTERN
Each participant is required to vote on a minimum of 4 Battles
Failure to comply will result in vote deductions
Check. Goin 1.
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You're the type to watch the notebook, get ur tissue n weep
This faggot sheds enough tear drops to keep Tony Parker on the bench for 3 weeks
W/ ya far fetched concepts..they keep the appetite of even the biggest radical full
None of ya lines straight, it's like Michael J. Fox wrote 'em mid-seizure on a mechanical bull
DAMN! this one is hard cause both of these punches are dope imo. comes down to execution and i feel Gal was off a tad with his flow in the punchline. Felt ill kay joint was roflz as well as flowed well soo he gets my vote. But dope from both. respects.
v. ill kay
ill Kay's bar was alright. The concept has been done a lot before but your Tony Parker flip was decent enough. I felt like Gal was trying you do too much in his punch. I get the concept but "Michael J Fox, mid-seizure on a mechanical bull" that's like...too much going on here. You could've revised it and made that bar more smooth and polished, but I wasn't feeling it as is.
v/illkay
yeah Gal ur concept was funny but Michael J. Fox has Parkinsons which he has the shakes not seizure like symptoms so sort of a misdirected hit maybe if u said "like Michael J. Fox with Parkinsons riding a mechanical bull" to that aspect it would've stood out more because most of us know he has that desease and the humor factor would've connected more if u know what I mean. ill kay funny concept as well I thought ur setup and finisher was relevant to the reference and was worded better more directly towards the humor factor.
V/Ill kay even tho I like Gals concept he could've done more with that
eh... i get where Ill was going but it just came off awkward to me... Gal's punch was too busy and came off more awkwardly... I suppose Ill is the lesser of 2 evils
vote Ill
Lets get some more votes....
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the michale J concept almost got me to vote for it. But theres something about the execution that makes it fall a little flat. Good line. But the wording is a kittkle off. Ill came with an alright conceot too. Also nothing to hard in my eyes. But i think it was executed with a stronger feel to it.
V.ill
5-0 in favor of ill kay, closed.
1 vote deducted from ill kay
4 votes deducted from Galactic
ill kay (4)
Galactic (-4)