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Topic is best sex with a hooker ever
G'Luck....
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10-20 lines
Due in an hour or so
Topic is best sex with a hooker ever
G'Luck....
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Partaking in all the pleasures
Humans always do endeavor
To experience one or another
My personal favourite? An amazing lover
So why go amateur? I’m a professional
Work for the bank and my salary exceptional
With the money I got I spent it wisely
My wrong decisions only came nightly..
I remember her now still , 22 years ago, July 1987
Trudie Vee, met her on the streets, who knew she could take me to heaven
Sellin her body at a fair price, she made me look twice
Red hair cascading looking oh so hot
Her green eyes and red mouth in a pout
Her body was slammin to say the fuckin least
I took one look at her and my body wanted to feast
Her ass pert and luscious, her tits looked so fucking precious
I wanted her right then and there, I know the impression she cared
To show was exactly this, and in that knowing moment I gave her a kiss
She cocked her eyebrow and my cock wanted in
I knew my fun night was about to begin
Paid her 10, she gave me a look, as if she knew I wasn’t a crook
Well a crook I wasn’t and I told her,
“plenty more where that came from, this folder
of cash, baby girl, as long as you do me right,
and I’ll pay you a lump sum at the end of the night”
back in my hotel room my cock dying to be free
she came out of the bathroom and showed herself to me
in sexy black lingerie with crotchless panties
if she weren’t a whore shed be the worlds best tease
I grabbed her arms and pinned her on the bed
And by her moans I knew she was likin what I did
Mounting myself on her sexy ass, I humped it in a way that did not suggest class
I let myself in on her sweet pussy slit, couldn’t help myself, the girl was fucking mint
nice drop^
enjoi....
I used to know this stripper, named fcukme, she was charmin man
I would hit it from the back n her ass would clap like a marchin band
So much great sex with her, I lost my job, it set me hard
furniture set, laptop, brand new car later maxed my credit cards
Her lips were like a potion of love, when she'd blow a kiss
her head felt like she was suckin my soul out thru my scrotums tip
I spent more time with her pearl than a jeweler man,
and I killed people just for tryin to smooch her hand
This little indian goddess used to charge $5 for lapdances and a feelin
But sex with her was priceless, worth forsaking my family and children
Fuck a bugatti, mansion, and lambo with peanut butter seats
I'd trade every bit of that to have that girl back between my sheets
She's a real hooker cuz her hooks so far in me it's crazy, better
believe for 15 minutes with that ass I'd stick my face thru a paper shredder
Her tits so nice I usually cum before I reach my belt,
but somehow she wakes him back up with a single fingernail
I love this hooker so much, that she got me fiendin for the top
Kinda way fiends on the block need a rock n end up theivin on the lots
I'm so pussywhipped I've got lash marks on my back and butt
If she told me to kill myself to hit it.....I'd ask her for the gun
i liked yours too lol
quite descriptive :)
OMG... a love connection... unbelievable... i couldnt read this verse... all i could stand to do was skim over it, but that was enough... get a room you two.....roflmao
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i liked both pieces, both had some cool imagery and . i think tht fcukme coulod be good with some practice but this piece was once again just a bit too simple, the lines really were coo but just hardly any creativity.......once again a deep story just not really creative. val had a bit better of a piece, obviously seemed pretty good.
v/ vallus
hit my battle with arch
This is getting slept on and it wasn't even THAT bad...
Imagery: Tie
Vocab: fcukme
Creativity: Vallus
Structure: Vallus
Multies: Vallus
Comments: Some x-rated shit up in here, someone needs to slap an 18+ sign on that title, for real... Both had great imagery, very descriptive.. fuckme you need to work on your structure like the opening was decent but it had no real end, it didn't feel like the story ended, just cut off as opposed to Vallus who had a simple but more clear cut ending... Vallus gets my vote for being more creative...
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