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LLL Season 11: Week 8
Current champion: Barcotic
Standard rules apply (found in the LLL Office).
Check in by Wednesday.
Drop by Friday, 11:59 PM (Eastern).
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Vote on atleast 5 battles.
MUST EDIT LINKS IN YOUR CHECK INS (-2 VOTES PER MISSING LINK).
Good luck. :alc:
16izzle....
ok.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...959/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...961/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...962/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...960/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...963/index.html
^no more open battles so i just gave josh some feedback. w/e
NOW its crystal clear to me how you made it atop LLLs thrown...Quote:
Originally Posted by Barcotic via profile msg 1 week ago
w/ more dickriding than a stripper trying to pay off her student loans
as far as records go, i'll be 5 n' 0 once im done pummeling you jerk
& you'll see 8 n-o's as 8 voters express how they feel towards ya verse
you're a flipping-ass nigga w/ the oldest concepts. sons in denial
even the comedic timing in your verse is calculated using sun dials
and level-headed people like you harbor no hate or hostility
so you'll be losing your cool, if by "cool" you mean title & winning streak
you play the underdog role but you'll die before i respect your shit
if i gotta root for you it conveniently detours off the edge of a cliff
lets be serious, its just a myth. u dont fuck w/ good looking women
thats an old wives tale & yours has the hooves & snout to go with it
congrats sonny. i've watched you come up & your popularity's grown
since you're a figurehead around here i'll leave 1,000 knots on ya dome
kid im killin you! doing the league & ya parents a favor with ether
they didnt want bar born & no one here'll see that match next week either
Listen..........
You're not one to strike, you might've had a decent punch once or twice
but the last time I saw Ken throw a haymaker, Ryu blocked it and won the fight..
So if you can't use your arms or kick, stop trying cuz you ain't harmin' kid
and if you ever throw a roundhouse.. that's just you getting mad at your garbage bin..
Your rap skills in general are dead bro, everybody and their friends know
a fighting fan would be the only person you'd ever hear saying Kenny KenFlo..
You say you're good at audio but I smell something fishy 'bout you queer
cuz if you ever made some tuna.. whole lot of listeners would be ripping out their ears..
You spit flop kid, you're not sick, you just talk a lot but never drop hot shit
so if silence is golden, we're hoping you start wearing chains, rings, earings and watches..
Everybody knows you're a loser, I think you need me or Phlymo as a tutor
but you in a champ match is breaking news, the whole league smashed their computers..
And I can't stand haters, mad cuz they don't get girls and I'm a damn player
but sometimes my dick has a rough week, your mom's old pussy is like sandpaper..
Your 4-0 record doesn't mean shit, you're weak so I put you to sleep quick
and when we say we want you awaken.. it means get the fuck outta the league bitch..
:spank:
NOW its crystal clear to me how you made it atop LLLs thrown...
w/ more dickriding than a stripper trying to pay off her student loans
lol
as far as records go, i'll be 5 n' 0 once im done pummeling you jerk
& you'll see 8 n-o's as 8 voters express how they feel towards ya verse
mehh
you're a flipping-ass nigga w/ the oldest concepts. sons in denial
even the comedic timing in your verse is calculated using sun dials
lol
and level-headed people like you harbor no hate or hostility
so you'll be losing your cool, if by "cool" you mean title & winning streak
mehh. nah/
you play the underdog role but you'll die before i respect your shit
if i gotta root for you it conveniently detours off the edge of a cliff
okish
lets be serious, its just a myth. u dont fuck w/ good looking women
thats an old wives tale & yours has the hooves & snout to go with it
ok
congrats sonny. i've watched you come up & your popularity's grown
since you're a figurehead around here i'll leave 1,000 knots on ya dome
coo
kid im killin you! doing the league & ya parents a favor with ether
they didnt want bar born & no one here'll see that match next week either
cool
vs
You're not one to strike, you might've had a decent punch once or twice
but the last time I saw Ken throw a haymaker, Ryu blocked it and won the fight..
mehh
So if you can't use your arms or kick, stop trying cuz you ain't harmin' kid
and if you ever throw a roundhouse.. that's just you getting mad at your garbage bin..
played
Your rap skills in general are dead bro, everybody and their friends know
a fighting fan would be the only person you'd ever hear saying Kenny KenFlo..
mehh,
You say you're good at audio but I smell something fishy 'bout you queer
cuz if you ever made some tuna.. whole lot of listeners would be ripping out their ears..
some tune? nah
You spit flop kid, you're not sick, you just talk a lot but never drop hot shit
so if silence is golden, we're hoping you start wearing chains, rings, earings and watches..
lol
Everybody knows you're a loser, I think you need me or Phlymo as a tutor
but you in a champ match is breaking news, the whole league smashed their computers..
mehh
And I can't stand haters, mad cuz they don't get girls and I'm a damn player
but sometimes my dick has a rough week, your mom's old pussy is like sandpaper..
coo
Your 4-0 record doesn't mean shit, you're weak so I put you to sleep quick
and when we say we want you awaken.. it means get the fuck outta the league bitch..
ok
overall- this one was close...i was feeling verses about equally- ken, you had some lines that were bad and some that were good, decent verse overall- bar- you had some garbage ass lines, but also had the best puncheS of the battle. idk which way to lean really....it's a tough choice to make, but i guess ill v/ kenny because of consistency
NOW its crystal clear to me how you made it atop LLLs thrown...
w/ more dickriding than a stripper trying to pay off her student loans
idea itself is played, but your final punch was cool.
as far as records go, i'll be 5 n' 0 once im done pummeling you jerk
& you'll see 8 n-o's as 8 voters express how they feel towards ya verse
lol good.
you're a flipping-ass nigga w/ the oldest concepts. sons in denial
even the comedic timing in your verse is calculated using sun dials
decent at best.
and level-headed people like you harbor no hate or hostility
so you'll be losing your cool, if by "cool" you mean title & winning streak
nope, simple and not hard hitting.
you play the underdog role but you'll die before i respect your shit
if i gotta root for you it conveniently detours off the edge of a cliff
didn't like this.
lets be serious, its just a myth. u dont fuck w/ good looking women
thats an old wives tale & yours has the hooves & snout to go with it
lol cool..
congrats sonny. i've watched you come up & your popularity's grown
since you're a figurehead around here i'll leave 1,000 knots on ya dome
cool.
kid im killin you! doing the league & ya parents a favor with ether
they didnt want bar born & no one here'll see that match next week either
not feelin this.
You're not one to strike, you might've had a decent punch once or twice
but the last time I saw Ken throw a haymaker, Ryu blocked it and won the fight..
poor opener..
So if you can't use your arms or kick, stop trying cuz you ain't harmin' kid
and if you ever throw a roundhouse.. that's just you getting mad at your garbage bin..
ok i suppose..
Your rap skills in general are dead bro, everybody and their friends know
a fighting fan would be the only person you'd ever hear saying Kenny KenFlo..
nope..pretty bland start to the verse thus far.
You say you're good at audio but I smell something fishy 'bout you queer
cuz if you ever made some tuna.. whole lot of listeners would be ripping out their ears..
lol nice.
You spit flop kid, you're not sick, you just talk a lot but never drop hot shit
so if silence is golden, we're hoping you start wearing chains, rings, earings and watches..
lol nice again.
Everybody knows you're a loser, I think you need me or Phlymo as a tutor
but you in a champ match is breaking news, the whole league smashed their computers..
alright.
And I can't stand haters, mad cuz they don't get girls and I'm a damn player
but sometimes my dick has a rough week, your mom's old pussy is like sandpaper..
lol cool
Your 4-0 record doesn't mean shit, you're weak so I put you to sleep quick
and when we say we want you awaken.. it means get the fuck outta the league bitch..
nope.
I liked 4 of Kenny's bars and 3 of Barcotic's. This was a decent battle..i felt both coulda had less misses with some tweaking. Both had some bad stuff and good stuff, but in the end Kenny edged this.
Vote - Kenny
NOW its crystal clear to me how you made it atop LLLs thrown...
w/ more dickriding than a stripper trying to pay off her student loans
nice personal, decent flip
as far as records go, i'll be 5 n' 0 once im done pummeling you jerk
& you'll see 8 n-o's as 8 voters express how they feel towards ya verse
works to an extent... decent
you're a flipping-ass nigga w/ the oldest concepts. sons in denial
even the comedic timing in your verse is calculated using sun dials
lol, good flip
and level-headed people like you harbor no hate or hostility
so you'll be losing your cool, if by "cool" you mean title & winning streak
decent
you play the underdog role but you'll die before i respect your shit
if i gotta root for you it conveniently detours off the edge of a cliff
decent
lets be serious, its just a myth. u dont fuck w/ good looking women
thats an old wives tale & yours has the hooves & snout to go with it
lmao, sick
congrats sonny. i've watched you come up & your popularity's grown
since you're a figurehead around here i'll leave 1,000 knots on ya dome
nah
kid im killin you! doing the league & ya parents a favor with ether
they didnt want bar born & no one here'll see that match next week either
good closer
Vs.
You're not one to strike, you might've had a decent punch once or twice
but the last time I saw Ken throw a haymaker, Ryu blocked it and won the fight..
nah
So if you can't use your arms or kick, stop trying cuz you ain't harmin' kid
and if you ever throw a roundhouse.. that's just you getting mad at your garbage bin..
played... flip wasn't fresh enough
Your rap skills in general are dead bro, everybody and their friends know
a fighting fan would be the only person you'd ever hear saying Kenny KenFlo..
decent
You say you're good at audio but I smell something fishy 'bout you queer
cuz if you ever made some tuna.. whole lot of listeners would be ripping out their ears..
LMFAO, seen this wordplay from a joke.. ''you can tuna piano but u cant tuna fish''
You spit flop kid, you're not sick, you just talk a lot but never drop hot shit
so if silence is golden, we're hoping you start wearing chains, rings, earings and watches..
nice flip
Everybody knows you're a loser, I think you need me or Phlymo as a tutor
but you in a champ match is breaking news, the whole league smashed their computers..
sick
And I can't stand haters, mad cuz they don't get girls and I'm a damn player
but sometimes my dick has a rough week, your mom's old pussy is like sandpaper..
lol, good
Your 4-0 record doesn't mean shit, you're weak so I put you to sleep quick
and when we say we want you awaken.. it means get the fuck outta the league bitch..
haha, nice closer
Bar's verse was pretty mediocre except the last 3 or 4 bars, wasn't enough to win the match really. kenny was pretty consistant and had around the same amount of nice lines, decent battle.
v/ Kenny
Kenny..
NOW its crystal clear to me how you made it atop LLLs thrown...
w/ more dickriding than a stripper trying to pay off her student loans
alright..
as far as records go, i'll be 5 n' 0 once im done pummeling you jerk
& you'll see 8 n-o's as 8 voters express how they feel towards ya verse
decent..
you're a flipping-ass nigga w/ the oldest concepts. sons in denial
even the comedic timing in your verse is calculated using sun dials
haha fresh..
and level-headed people like you harbor no hate or hostility
so you'll be losing your cool, if by "cool" you mean title & winning streak
semi-fresh
you play the underdog role but you'll die before i respect your shit
if i gotta root for you it conveniently detours off the edge of a cliff
this one's alright, kinda played out a little
lets be serious, its just a myth. u dont fuck w/ good looking women
thats an old wives tale & yours has the hooves & snout to go with it
dope.. haha
congrats sonny. i've watched you come up & your popularity's grown
since you're a figurehead around here i'll leave 1,000 knots on ya dome
eh, could've been better
kid im killin you! doing the league & ya parents a favor with ether
they didnt want bar born & no one here'll see that match next week either
sweet closer, that one was nice for real. I like punches that are relevant to what's going on in the league..
Strong verse for sure, from start to finish.. No complaints, some lines were better than others you had some real nice ones especially your closer and the sundial lines. I thought those ones were fresh as fuck. Now I'm gonna break down Bar's
Barcotic..
Listen..........
You're not one to strike, you might've had a decent punch once or twice
but the last time I saw Ken throw a haymaker, Ryu blocked it and won the fight..
solid personal, I haven't seen ryu in ages.. he still at rm?
So if you can't use your arms or kick, stop trying cuz you ain't harmin' kid
and if you ever throw a roundhouse.. that's just you getting mad at your garbage bin..
decente'
Your rap skills in general are dead bro, everybody and their friends know
a fighting fan would be the only person you'd ever hear saying Kenny KenFlo..
haha kinda fresh, made me laugh
You say you're good at audio but I smell something fishy 'bout you queer
cuz if you ever made some tuna.. whole lot of listeners would be ripping out their ears..
I think this could have been worded better and it bothers me that some kat is saying you stole it from somewhere.. whatever though i'm not letting that play into my vote because I don't think you'd do that..
You spit flop kid, you're not sick, you just talk a lot but never drop hot shit
so if silence is golden, we're hoping you start wearing chains, rings, earings and watches..
favorite line of your verse, very fresh..
Everybody knows you're a loser, I think you need me or Phlymo as a tutor
but you in a champ match is breaking news, the whole league smashed their computers..
decent one for sure..
And I can't stand haters, mad cuz they don't get girls and I'm a damn player
but sometimes my dick has a rough week, your mom's old pussy is like sandpaper..
ah kinda played, would be cool if you actually did fuck his moms..
Your 4-0 record doesn't mean shit, you're weak so I put you to sleep quick
and when we say we want you awaken.. it means get the fuck outta the league bitch..
mediocre closer..
My favorite line of this entire battle came from your verse Bar. The one about silence being golden hahaha, that was dope as fuck. Some of your lines just weren't really doing it for me though. I felt like your verse was really hit or miss, and when the punches were on they hit hard but some of the stuff seemed kinda rushed and not completely thought out. Your verse was dope don't get me wrong, I've just seen you come a lot better...
Even though Barcotic dropped my favorite line of the battle, I gotta throw my vote at Kenny for his consistency. Nice battle peoples..
NOW its crystal clear to me how you made it atop LLLs thrown...
w/ more dickriding than a stripper trying to pay off her student loans
you're a flipping-ass nigga w/ the oldest concepts. sons in denial
even the comedic timing in your verse is calculated using sun dials
lets be serious, its just a myth. u dont fuck w/ good looking women
thats an old wives tale & yours has the hooves & snout to go with it
kid im killin you! doing the league & ya parents a favor with ether
they didnt want bar born & no one here'll see that match next week either
vs
You're not one to strike, you might've had a decent punch once or twice
but the last time I saw Ken throw a haymaker, Ryu blocked it and won the fight..
You spit flop kid, you're not sick, you just talk a lot but never drop hot shit
so if silence is golden, we're hoping you start wearing chains, rings, earings and watches..
Everybody knows you're a loser, I think you need me or Phlymo as a tutor
but you in a champ match is breaking news, the whole league smashed their computers..
Your 4-0 record doesn't mean shit, you're weak so I put you to sleep quick
and when we say we want you awaken.. it means get the fuck outta the league bitch..
I have it tied in Quotables... so what it comes down to is the rest of the verse... neither had huge misses, but Bar had a couple of bars that came off corny like the Garbage bin and tuna lines... so i give it to Ken for being just a tad better overall... good shit though...
vote Ken
NOW its crystal clear to me how you made it atop LLLs thrown...
w/ more dickriding than a stripper trying to pay off her student loans
lmao.. decent
as far as records go, i'll be 5 n' 0 once im done pummeling you jerk
& you'll see 8 n-o's as 8 voters express how they feel towards ya verse
decent, comes off a bit awkward but good concept
you're a flipping-ass nigga w/ the oldest concepts. sons in denial
even the comedic timing in your verse is calculated using sun dials
lol
and level-headed people like you harbor no hate or hostility
so you'll be losing your cool, if by "cool" you mean title & winning streak
eh, ok
you play the underdog role but you'll die before i respect your shit
if i gotta root for you it conveniently detours off the edge of a cliff
okay
lets be serious, its just a myth. u dont fuck w/ good looking women
thats an old wives tale & yours has the hooves & snout to go with it
aiight coo
congrats sonny. i've watched you come up & your popularity's grown
since you're a figurehead around here i'll leave 1,000 knots on ya dome
not bad
kid im killin you! doing the league & ya parents a favor with ether
they didnt want bar born & no one here'll see that match next week either
decent
vs
You're not one to strike, you might've had a decent punch once or twice
but the last time I saw Ken throw a haymaker, Ryu blocked it and won the fight..
corny.. think I've seen ken/ryu punches used on him too
So if you can't use your arms or kick, stop trying cuz you ain't harmin' kid
and if you ever throw a roundhouse.. that's just you getting mad at your garbage bin..
ok-ish
Your rap skills in general are dead bro, everybody and their friends know
a fighting fan would be the only person you'd ever hear saying Kenny KenFlo..
okay
You say you're good at audio but I smell something fishy 'bout you queer
cuz if you ever made some tuna.. whole lot of listeners would be ripping out their ears..
dunno, the tuna thing didn't seem relevant to the actual punch but it was okay
You spit flop kid, you're not sick, you just talk a lot but never drop hot shit
so if silence is golden, we're hoping you start wearing chains, rings, earings and watches..
played flip.. decent twist on it tho
Everybody knows you're a loser, I think you need me or Phlymo as a tutor
but you in a champ match is breaking news, the whole league smashed their computers..
okay, coo
And I can't stand haters, mad cuz they don't get girls and I'm a damn player
but sometimes my dick has a rough week, your mom's old pussy is like sandpaper..
aiight, nasty.. more of a diss to yourself.. but alright
Your 4-0 record doesn't mean shit, you're weak so I put you to sleep quick
and when we say we want you awaken.. it means get the fuck outta the league bitch..
seems a bit forced but it works.. decent hit
decent match here.. I think ken brought the haymakers tho..
good stuff guys..
vote Kenny
NOW its crystal clear to me how you made it atop LLLs thrown...
w/ more dickriding than a stripper trying to pay off her student loans
obvious flip
as far as records go, i'll be 5 n' 0 once im done pummeling you jerk
& you'll see 8 n-o's as 8 voters express how they feel towards ya verse
alright
you're a flipping-ass nigga w/ the oldest concepts. sons in denial
even the comedic timing in your verse is calculated using sun dials
haha
and level-headed people like you harbor no hate or hostility
so you'll be losing your cool, if by "cool" you mean title & winning streak
funny
you play the underdog role but you'll die before i respect your shit
if i gotta root for you it conveniently detours off the edge of a cliff
naa
lets be serious, its just a myth. u dont fuck w/ good looking women
thats an old wives tale & yours has the hooves & snout to go with it
haha
congrats sonny. i've watched you come up & your popularity's grown
since you're a figurehead around here i'll leave 1,000 knots on ya dome
no
kid im killin you! doing the league & ya parents a favor with ether
they didnt want bar born & no one here'll see that match next week either
mehh
vs
You're not one to strike, you might've had a decent punch once or twice
but the last time I saw Ken throw a haymaker, Ryu blocked it and won the fight..
played
So if you can't use your arms or kick, stop trying cuz you ain't harmin' kid
and if you ever throw a roundhouse.. that's just you getting mad at your garbage bin..
naa
Your rap skills in general are dead bro, everybody and their friends know
a fighting fan would be the only person you'd ever hear saying Kenny KenFlo..
not feelin
You say you're good at audio but I smell something fishy 'bout you queer
cuz if you ever made some tuna.. whole lot of listeners would be ripping out their ears..
okish
You spit flop kid, you're not sick, you just talk a lot but never drop hot shit
so if silence is golden, we're hoping you start wearing chains, rings, earings and watches..
alright
Everybody knows you're a loser, I think you need me or Phlymo as a tutor
but you in a champ match is breaking news, the whole league smashed their computers..
hate flips like this
And I can't stand haters, mad cuz they don't get girls and I'm a damn player
but sometimes my dick has a rough week, your mom's old pussy is like sandpaper..
haha
Your 4-0 record doesn't mean shit, you're weak so I put you to sleep quick
and when we say we want you awaken.. it means get the fuck outta the league bitch..
naa
bar had an off week.. kenny came alright. he was more consistent & his execution was real smooth.
v/ken
as far as records go, i'll be 5 n' 0 once im done pummeling you jerk
& you'll see 8 n-o's as 8 voters express how they feel towards ya verse
you're a flipping-ass nigga w/ the oldest concepts. sons in denial
even the comedic timing in your verse is calculated using sun dials
and level-headed people like you harbor no hate or hostility
so you'll be losing your cool, if by "cool" you mean title & winning streak
lets be serious, its just a myth. u dont fuck w/ good looking women
thats an old wives tale & yours has the hooves & snout to go with it
VS
Your rap skills in general are dead bro, everybody and their friends know
a fighting fan would be the only person you'd ever hear saying Kenny KenFlo..
You spit flop kid, you're not sick, you just talk a lot but never drop hot shit
so if silence is golden, we're hoping you start wearing chains, rings, earings and watches..
And I can't stand haters, mad cuz they don't get girls and I'm a damn player
but sometimes my dick has a rough week, your mom's old pussy is like sandpaper..
I got Kenny taking this by one punch...
Good back and forth, but I think Kenny dropped a bit steadier, more consistent.
That's that.
Peace
Good battle..
Kenny wins, Barcotic loses....