WK 7 CHAMP MATCH - Allen Knight vs Smog (Smog Wins By NS)

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Ak's pathetic see, his wife wishes she never met this geek,
So when She gets my package..it's overnight n im kissing ur kids on the head to sleep,
I'll dead this weak head at ease,i got no worries G,
Cuz u dont just blow bad. U give every below av hoe a sense of job security,
My aim is direct, while he flexin it's time ta kill this chump,
Cuz When he swings this Cadillac control like he fell asleep behind the wheel of one...
I clap steel, these satanic acts kill n make Allen seek gospel,
If he strapped wit iron maaan...it's the Velcro on his Halloween costume,
i flow most honest yo, n imma show up phenomenal ,
We know ur pelvic split.. N so will u after these gut shots bring pain to ur lower abdominal,
If u claim this war... Dawg.. When it rains it pours
Cuz after ur delta loss.. ull learn ur fam just crashed in that plain offshore...
Fuckin faggot flake lackin game, when's the last time u had a date
I mean if u say night life sux.. It's cuz he aint heard OUTSIDA house after 8,
My squad kills so dawg chill.. Don't get forced in ta my life,
try n Marcus Allen.. Ill hit u so hard we'll relive a 90's sports center highlight,
Phony fuck ur bogus, don't pose tough u silly BITCH.
When I take his belt he'll sign out after his pants drop n expose what he really is...
Catch a suplex while I'm hollerin "who's next".. I'm done wrestling this dike,
N u won't just bounce dawg.. U'll ricochet off tha screen while exiting this site...


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@.Allen Knight.

Another vet no shows to Smog... He's got them shook. I will leave feed.

@.Allen Knight.

Wtf.... Didn't see this coming

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Lol @ kissing this man's kids heads...
Marcus Allen line was decent

Delta and Cadillac were good concepts for like 2007 even though delta is a current event.

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Originally Posted by Smog

Ak's pathetic see, his wife wishes she never met this geek,
So when She gets my package..it's overnight n im kissing ur kids on the head to sleep,
Lol this was cool.
I'll dead this weak head at ease,i got no worries G,
Cuz u dont just blow bad. U give every below av hoe a sense of job security,
Executed well, but not sure I was really feeling it.
My aim is direct, while he flexin it's time ta kill this chump,
Cuz When he swings this Cadillac control like he fell asleep behind the wheel of one...
I've never seen this so I thought this was dope.
I clap steel, these satanic acts kill n make Allen seek gospel,
If he strapped wit iron maaan...it's the Velcro on his Halloween costume,
Lol it's funny, but I've seen too many iron man concepts in the last month.
i flow most honest yo, n imma show up phenomenal ,
We know ur pelvic split.. N so will u after these gut shots bring pain to ur lower abdominal,
Wasn't feeling this. Kinda statementish.
If u claim this war... Dawg.. When it rains it pours
Cuz after ur delta loss.. ull learn ur fam just crashed in that plain offshore...
Ok this was cool.
Fuckin faggot flake lackin game, when's the last time u had a date
I mean if u say night life sux.. It's cuz he aint heard OUTSIDA house after 8,
Executed well.
My squad kills so dawg chill.. Don't get forced in ta my life,
try n Marcus Allen.. Ill hit u so hard we'll relive a 90's sports center highlight,
Lol I think you could've worded this better, but not bad.
Phony fuck ur bogus, don't pose tough u silly BITCH.
When I take his belt he'll sign out after his pants drop n expose what he really is...
Another well executed concept. I've seen this before I thiiiiink, but you worded it well.
Catch a suplex while I'm hollerin "who's next".. I'm done wrestling this dike,
N u won't just bounce dawg.. U'll ricochet off tha screen while exiting this site...
Lol this was cool.


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Smog, big improvement bro. I can tell you are putting more time into your verses. You had a few solid jabs in here. I didn't see a haymaker, but you were relatively consistent throughout. You had a couple misses, but in a 20 bar battle it's hard not to. Good verse.