Its True

Its true...

If you heard it its true and then you should know what to do

If you saw it the you must believe because everything is as it seems to you

If you heard it dont ignore just because you've heard it all before

If you saw it trust your sight I'm the only one blinded by the night

If you heard me scream then its just your imagination

If you see my pain ignore it if only for your reputation

If you heard my voice then you've known my heart

If you've seen my cry then you know acting can be an art

If you heard the lies then you should understand the truth

If you see the light then there's no need for proof

If you heard what i was saying then you missed my point

If you see my point then what I said connects the elbows like joints

If you heard me live then you've seen me die

If you saw me live then you'd hear me cry

If you hear where I'm coming from then you know where I'm going

If you see that we are in the same boat why arent you rowing

If I can reach you then why are you straining

If you cant changes things then aint no need for complaining

If you cant pray then why do you believe

If you dont believe then why dont you pray

If you cant struggle then are you really alive

If you cant love then you dont deserve a piece of the pie

If I am yours then you'd treat me bad

If your mine then we are both far past sad

If I can own you then theres no place to go

If I cant go then maybe I have just imposed

If I have imposed then I have takin far to much time

If you still reading this isnt the last line

If you hate what you see then fail to read

If you love what you read then you like me have greed

If you can show me that way then I'll follow

If you cant lead my then why dont we just wallow

If the truth is hidden then wheres the lie

If Lies are free how much does the truth cost

If I cant afford the truth why you tell me a cheap lie

If a cheap lies all i need then why is there truth

If you cant understand what I'm saying then our lives surely are decaying

If you understand then we are all the same

and that means no ones to blame and theres no need for shame because we all feel the same and if you dont then maybe you should open you mouth and enter the game and see if you can put a single one of us to shame or maybe I'm just talking for me but all the same I'm giving you waht you need or is it what i need I speak in code but its simple to decipher just like inside your self the answers in your life..er... maybe I shouldnt have said that cause then that relates us two and that means I'm just like you but I see that I'm blind and you dont see that we are both stumbling in the dark for and answer that cant possible exsist in either of us but we both will fight to find something that will relate the events in a line but there is no correlation we are just random bits of information white noise in a scheme thats bigger then anyone single mind should ever try to comprehend... nevermind just keep doing what your doing and then when there is and end you will see that the mind that seeks is the mind that has the key...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...75#post7809875
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...60#post7809860

Look here man, For every OM you post, leave feedback on two OM's the edit in those links. If you want people to actually give you negative criticism then you have to return the favor. Its not much to ask for, wtf? Then you wonder why the forums are dying!

Shit! You have more than 4/5 pieces written with no links.

^^LMFAO... get him told!

hahaha... considerin i was postin them up at an ungodly hour in the am...insomnia issues... I did start to give feedback on a few of the things i saw here I fell asleep in the middle of doin it... I read the rules brah brah and have every intention of pastin links for each respective piece I dropped... I think you.re a mod on the site so i'm sure you can see that i have already begun to give feed on others material so did you do this just to syce a few laughs or you just wanted to say something cause you feel you have the right?

It had to be said, I'll have some clean up the extra posts i have just made